Reviews for Tengoku ni Ochiru
pinkdoughnuts chapter 31 . 1/10/2016
This is good, but so much angst.
I would love it if you could update soon.
Poor Ivan he's always made into the abusive villain.
I can't believe what Ludwig is doing, if they find out it won't be pretty.
pinkdoughnuts chapter 23 . 1/9/2016
I loved that song, though the only disney song I know by heart is colours of the wind from pocahontas, cause she looks like my older sister.
pinkdoughnuts chapter 16 . 1/9/2016
I think this is cute, I'm glad that you chose to make Francis and Arthur friends since most people make them enemies if there is no FRUK involved.
I read what you wrote. I hate Of mice and men, found it boring and I was glad what happened to Lennie... got called cold hearted by my English teacher
thisisup-upisno chapter 28 . 2/23/2014
...WHY do you call ladybugs a bird? A least we make SENSE! It's not a bird, it's an insect!
(Strange Brits...)
thisisup-upisno chapter 26 . 2/23/2014
Dude what
I have met TWO-
-READ IT TWO-
Catholics in my life.
Both of them guys.
Both of them douches.
(But I digress.)
Dude, there are so few Catholics here it makes Italy want to cry everytime he sees America. The percentages speak for themselves.
There are, however, a HECK of a lotta denominations of Christianity around. Most of these came from Protestantism, I believe.
But. Hey.
nikkicchi chapter 17 . 4/15/2013
Hot damn, Arthur. Fuckin' hot damnnnn.
I can't even believe I /turned red/ at that thrusting hips part. Like.. 'tf. I barely even blush but here I am sinking in my seat hiding underneath the covers while imagining Iggy dry-humping Alfred, with a red face and whatnot. Damn, man. Love it ;9 Especially how you transition smoothly from cuteness to seriousness to sexiness. Sneaky author. But that's all good, cause you still rock.
GeenieMac chapter 31 . 3/29/2012
Awesome story can't wait for you to continue :)
Nemi Mercer chapter 5 . 3/22/2012
Is this fanfic finished? Please don't take my question seriously. I LOVE THIS FANFIC!
Nemi Mercer chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
I love this fanfic.
rsdo456a chapter 21 . 2/3/2012
The perfect song for this fanfic? Hero/Heroine by boys like girls. The lyrics are perfect! From alfred's pov that is :3
HawkWithGlasses chapter 31 . 1/6/2012
So...how to put this..I'm horrible at words _; I LOVE YOUR WORK. -blushes- Alright. I already added you on my favorite authors list because your stories are so much more than just -smutsmutsmut- ((even though I enjoy it VERY much )) and I like it. I really hope you make a sequel to this story because...well I'll come up with a reason once this story is finished. Your writing is superb, I love the plot development and the characters are very much believable in their actions. I have read all 31 chapters in this dead of morning so "scuzi" if I am rambling or just sound plain WEIRD. In my group of friends I am also honored to be the bushy-browed, scone-burning, fairy-believer~ :D So, from one England to another, Good show and keep up the awesome writing!

-K.G
ChamiriHatake101 chapter 23 . 12/18/2011
I love that song and the scene that you had with them epic! I love this chapter and now i'm getting more curious about Russia's part in Arthur's past. I'm going to read some more now, can't wait to read the rest! :)
owcottonitch chapter 31 . 11/25/2011
Aw! This story is so cute! But sinister ~ I wanna know what happens next! DX

Good job with the character developments, I know that can sometimes be REALLY hard to get right. Can't wait to read more~!
Guest chapter 31 . 1/22/2011
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1hellyeahz1 chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
YEAH! *Grabs a randomn Harry Potter book*

Oh, poor Alfred. Your father obviously has ruined your views of the world. Fear not, soon Arthur will f*** your ass and change them all.

Bwahahahaha...

*ahem* Please excuse my randomn perverted moment. I have got to start hanging out with some different people...

Anyways, I love your story. I love how the plot flow is extremly smooth, and while there are some unexpected moments, those moments smooth into the plot as well, and they just seem to fit.
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