Loved the story and the couples coming together

Well, my hands are clapping. You have these voices down pat. I like Kira and Josef together - Kira especially likes it! (smiles).

I very much like that Kira has made Josef look at her as the spirited, independent woman that she is. I gathered there always was a something for him on her part. Josef just had to get it clear in his own head. They are good together.

And, you write very well - very well indeed.

Well, I just read Chapter 4 and that sound you hear are my hands clapping.

A great read - you have their voices and a good way with telling this storyline.

Chapter 3 and you wrote it beautifully.

You really are a very good writer - you have blended the TV show storyline in with your writing of a new character or two.

And I am liking this a great deal.

You have the touch for writing.

Great writing on this - and you have woven the storyline of the show into this Kira's "reality"; making her a part of it - a part of Mick and Josef.

You have got the touch for these characters - you have their voices and this is a really good read.

Very good writing - a fair amount of reasoning has gone in to this storyline and I appreciate it a great deal.

I like Kira. Josef and Kira together isn't such a bad idea, but I think it is hard for Josef to be a "one woman" kind of man.

Now I have read it all. I do like the way you tell the story and the behind the scenes, scenes. I like the way Kira refuses to be commanded. Josef needed to hear that. All the loving scenes were well written. I enjoyed your story and look forward to the next one.

These are excellent, very well-done.

I liked the reference to how Josef was going to explain still being alive - another 1 of those loose ends that didn't get taken care of...

Sorry I'm so late with this review. Real life has been intruding. I'm so impressed with how you integrated Kira with the other characters and tied up loose ends from the show. Most enjoyable, keep writing!

Jat,

I love the way you expounded on the original story. The Tv series moved so fast that it left out alot of unexplained emotions and actions that Mick and Beth displayed. I loved this story.

First let me apologize for not getting over here sooner to post comments. I had a lot of problems with my old computer and had it in at Best Buy to only find out I need a new one which I still don't have yet, so I'm working off a laptop for now.

What a wonderful story this was. You introduced us to and fit Kira into the story line seamlessly. I enjoyed this very much and you were very canon to the show's story and characters. I see you left us with questions, as to whether Ben will keep looking into Mick and what will Beth do about a long relationship with Mick? Will she someday consider being turned? Hmn. You certainly can continue on with this story line and I hope that you will someday. I know you are going back to your other story and I will get over to that one too as soon as I get a chance. But thanks again for this wonderful story Jat.

Finally I can post a review ...

Jat, the last chapter is great. I love this fanfic. I think your fanfic fits really good to the show. You did a really good job.

Love

Cleo

Last chapter! First of all I wanted to tell you that you've done a very good job with this fic. Creating an OC is difficult and, although I love fics with OCs, is sometimes rejected by fans because this is not canon or they fear a Mary-Sue fiction.

I think KIra is a amazing character, you developped just enough of her background to know her and let some mystery. I'll be happy to see a sequel of this even if I do realize than the lack of new episodes means you'll have to imagine a whole plot.

More specifically, this chapter was very sweet with the two couples, Beth and Kira making up but I like that you didn't forget the case here and that Ben made an appearence, it added nice edge to the whole chapter. I guess you could use it to start the sequel...

Again, it was a pleasure to read this fic. Thank you and I hope to see Kira soon again.

So first, he, Mick and Beth did it! Finally! lol.

This is frustration speaking, the last scene on the show, with the door closing is so argh. lol.

And Kira and Josef made up! You solved the "Simone issue" well I think. I loved her in the show but I think you did the right choice here. Kira had to be with Josef and I'm happy to see it happening.

I'm a bad bad reviewer, I'm so late to review the three last chapters of this fic. Shame on me.

;)

On the chapter, I like that you developped the thing with Beth, not being include in the escape plan because Beth tends to forget that Mick's different and that the vampire community has its own rules. Also, the parallel between what Emma did and Kira's past was interesting.

Of course, I loved the last scene between KIra and Josef. Josef doesn't see that KIra's grown up, still treating her like his child and it was the time for her to make her point. I love this two together.