I couldn't not review this. It's absolutely amazing...MY EMOTIONS!

This is by far Troy story! I would kill for another!

Oh god, this is breathtakingly beautiful. You are a true artist, thank you.

I really, really like your Patroclus & Achilles fics, especially since it explores many sides of Achilles. How should I say this... I think your portrayal of showing how Achilles would react if Patroclus came back alive from the battle was very realistic. Achilles was known for his volatile nature, and especially his violent side. To see him silence about that whole affair would hit people a lot more harder about the gravity of the situation than had he had just yelled, especially when, while Patroclus would learn to never go against Achilles' order, he wouldn't have been repentant about it. Many story I've read had captured the gentle side of Achilles, but this is first time I've seen the wise, parental (silently teaching his younger cousin a lesson) part of him. In addition, despite the silent treatment, you still managed to show that Achilles cared by through him tending Patroclus' wounds. Thank you for writing this.

Aww! This is so sweet! I love the relationship these two have. I love family, especially brotherhood like these two.

WRITE ON!

Good story

Wow, fantastic oneshot! :) I was browsing through the Troy fanfic archive and wondering when I would stumble upon one of these. I've always thought that it was such an original and interesting concept, and I've always been curious to see how Achilles would truly react to Patroclus doing that...

And I have to say: You didn't disappoint! :) You captured the whole situation and everybody's reactions brilliantly. This whole oneshot was well-written, and Achilles' reaction was extremely realistic, because let's face it: When he's upset with you, he's the type who likes to play hard to get and sulk silently in the corner until you seek him out. LOL!

I always thought that if Patroclus had survived the battle Achilles would have given him hell for stealing his armour. But this is...well, not what I expected! You've captured my imagination with this. Thank you!

This is one of the best stories I've read on Fanfiction in a while. I absolutely loved it. It pulled on my heartstrings.

I like that he lived and think you handled everyone's reactions very well. I'd love to see more stories like this..I know I'd be a huge fan.

Well done!

AUs are always interesting to think about...this story was quite good.

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awesome! i wish i knew your actual name so i could read Honor when it's published! your writing style is extremely similar to mine and i think your idea was great!

I'm not ashamed to say I teared up at this. Amazingly emotional.

Oh this was beautiful... I generally love stories that deal with Achilles/Patroclus-realtionship (may it be brotherly or slash etc.) and I think you handeled it very well. Achilles' reaction was really believable and Patroclus' portrait isn't out of character either. And it's nice to see a story where Patroclus survives - without it being made unrealistic. So good job!

I loved this. I've been waiting for a story exactly like this wiht Patroclus surviving. Thank you!

Omg, im like, officially obsessed with your Troy fics! So beautifully written.

Ps, you gave me a whole new appreciation of Eudorus. :)

*Roxxy,