Well, screwed up my chapter 11 review so I'll finish it here. As I was saying, but... There is a sequel to look forward to.

I know I've read this before. Not sure why I didn't review it. It's a really good story. A little sad at the end, but

wah? but...i wanted my happy charrah ending! *sobs* it was still an awesome story though

Well written story that I mostly enjoyed. Hated that this was yet ANOTHER story where it seems to centre around Chuck making the decisions for him and Sarah, and Sarah just having to go along with it even though she doesn't want to. Lets see some stories where Sarah dumps him and hes left pining for her !,

Good story with a bittersweet ending. But I suppose that's to be expected given all the heartache Chuck and Sarah have been through. Maybe they really could heal each other, or maybe they need time apart to heal first. I hope you have a sequel written!

It doesn't seem like Chuck is doing much to find Orion. Severn just searching online, sending random messages out is bound to get Orion's attention at some point.

Good progress so far. Chuck's doing a good job staying ahead and still doing some good. Just thought I would drop a technical note: you wouldn't use ibuprofen as a painkiller if you're bleeding since it thins your blood and prevents cuts from clotting. Acetaminophen is the goto painkiller in that scenario.

One if the better Chuck-goes-on-the-run stories so far. He seems pretty callous about Sarah's feelings for him though. He saw how hard it was for her when he broke it off in your last story. I'm sure you'll address it in later chapters though.

Awesome job ! XP

Good Story

DAMN! What a sad ending! I really thought they would end up together. Still, I loved your story!

when are you gonna write the sequel?

The ending was unexpected, but considering the journey, perhaps it would not have been realistic to have them happily together by the end; there is a lot of healing that needs to happen first. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, even through the non-Charah patches along the way, because it was exciting and adventurous. I'll look forward to your sequel once those batteries get recharged. Thanks for posting!

Very exciting, especially the way you described Chuck jumping from the window to escape. Now I have more questions though, such as who the heck is Weaving..? On to the next...Thanks!

Interesting story and ending. I love Charah but you played it right here and did what you did. I hope to see more of this AU and maybe see some Charah but...maybe that's not in your plans. I'll take a look see anyway. Thanks for writing it and keep up the good work.