Reviews for If Only
Rain.unloved chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
I actually love the ending. Tak would never give up on trying to destroy Zim, even if she fall in love with an idea
iluvGIR chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
BITCH! :( T_T
Invader Era chapter 2 . 12/31/2010
That was a very well thought out story. You had all the characters personality's right, and I truly hope you will write more ZATR stories. Well done!
BlueberryC chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
I LOVE IT! the ending of the first chapter made me sad, but this makes me HAPPY! I LOVE IT!
madhappy77 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
really awesome story! the only romances in IZ that i like are ZATR and very occasionally ZAGR. The main point is if its well-written. And I'd DEFINITELY say your story is well written. Very awesome! En core, en core... i'd like to read more IZ fics by you...maybe one about GIR?

-madhappy77
Doragon Eichi chapter 2 . 4/17/2010
wow...just wow... I can honestly say your story is the first Zim Invader story i have read and i might be able to say that it might be the best...
Smith And Co chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Thanks so much for the good feedback! im so glad you read my ending
werd chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
your story rasies serious questions of what self awareness really is one action changes zim completely coming from a guy with not rely knowing him self it was good I would like to write about other invaders like stink as they are forgotten invader do you think you could also say eh flobee that would be great
Skelebro chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
Oh hey, this! I remember this! I should have given a review the first time, since something actually well written on this site is like a diamond in a pile of...

Anyways, I Liked the ambiguous ending, and the later ending satisfied my "Good End" craving. Well done. Kudos. Other words that express genuine approval.
swordman600 chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
wow zim's base is now taks... you should continue
Victoria chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
YAY! you finished it! and i already seen the other ending of if only! they were great! still sad that non ended with a kiss...oh well not my fic but it really was good!
deCrypted chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
First off, WOW! I liked the way you kept the characters pretty much the same in the episodes, and the alterations were amazing! For a first fan fic, that is pretty awesome and i would like to see some more.

DON'T PULL THE TRIGGER!
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
nice
Rose chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
CHANGE OF HEART!w
creatorofkillerkitty chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
This is your FIRST? Oh mai gosh. This is... WONDERFUL! Probably the BEST invader zim fan fiction I have EVER read! I'm... Inspired, I would say. :,D
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