Hrm. Not really a lot to say about this one, but it's still quite well-written. Even if it doesn't grab my attention, you're still rather good.

you are the only person who writes about these two together and oddly enough it works, it works so well that i might end up liking this weird pairing more than KonoSetsu. so kudos to you. keep up the good work

AWESOMEEEEEEEE!

Wow... So beautifully written. You captured the essence of their characters perfectly. I loved it. This was absolutely amazing. You're a brilliant writer. :)

Hey I love ur history

Tsukuyomi is the best enemy from setsuna

good job :p

This is quite well done

Your characterizations were on the mark with this one.

There weren't any grammar mistakes as far as I could tell.

keep up the good work.

Sugoi, sugoi! Love the story! Please continue!

very good. loved the whole thing from beggining to end. your writing style is both unique and perfectly portrayed the characters in such a way that i actually felt like it was done by Akamatsu himself. 10 out of 10 and i hope to see more stories like this in the future.

That was written really well, Tsukuyomi's personality is perfect! Although I'm not a fan of this pairing, please update soon.