oh my lord. Great story but damn i was expecting a light happy read.
NOT HAPPY AT ALLL.

i mean creative? but ah synesthesia is no where near a condition

THIS WAS AWESOME! Good Job on that fic, the Plottwist was real.

This is really great! I managed to finish this in one go so I noticed that you already hinted the twist from the start.. It was just heavily implied in chap 7.. I really like this :3

This is really great! I managed to finish this in one go so I noticed that you already hinted the twist from the start.. It was just heavily implied in chap 7.. I really like this :3

AWESOME STORY! But...Whats the noise?

...Holy...Fucking...Shit...Talk about HAPPY THOUGHTS. (sarcastic tone)

omg I thought they never would kiss! ehehee I loved the end! I loved that story really! yove got some talent! but you'd probably know that already xD so keep up! ;)

hahah that's right! sora would have a looooot of personalities then xD I love that song by the way! I still think they can solve their problems :3 hehe (from chapter 12, actually) this chap was so cute at the end!

I expected Roxas would become insane... and I started to think his silbings were dead a couple chapters before... but I didn't expected it that way! all the clues were there! but untill you put them together you can't tell the whole thing! it isreally well done, as you probably know already xD I just wanted to tell you myself :3

woah... didn't expect that at all! maybe the vanitas version had gotten him xD

Heyy! that is a very interesting fanfic, really! at frist I thought I didn't like the fact that Namine was totally crazy, but now that I think her problem can be solved its a different story I really like the progress of the story and the mystery of Roxas's problem to sleep and all. this is really good! :D

I really liked this story. Sort of expected he would turn out to be crazy, but didn't expect that his siblings would be dead. Awesome job, keep writing!

Omg. I don't have any words to describe how amazing this story is! In the beginning when Roxas was have a hard time sleeping, I thought he might have a sleeping disorder and that's why it is, "We are all mad here," not this! Omg this is so sad I literally freaked out! What a plot twist! I never seen something like this before and I wouldn't have imagined to find something like this in a Fanfiction. You are amazing and should totally write a real book about this! I bet it would be a Best Seller! Jeez, I really love this lol.

This is a really good story. I really enjoyed it.
The thought that Sora and Xion are dead is kinda sad but okay i guess...
Somehow i get the feeling this story hasn't ended yet. I mean, what happend to Roxas? How did Sora and Xion hasn't "visit" him anymore. I've expected much more conflicts in this whole going crazy stuff.
It would have been nice if you made Roxas that he had accepted their dead and they slowy fade from his side and i wonder what happend to Naminé. She isn't cured. I mean no person in a mental hospital is really cured after their stay, they still have small habits of doing something differently.

All in all this story is very pleasing to me. :)