Wow. This is amazing.

WOW! READING THAT LAST PART JUST MADE THAT ONE PART IN "WHAT YOU OWN" ALL THE MORE AWESOME.

Wow, I really like this. I think it expresses how Roger feels about Mark,although I don't think it was fair how he thinks of Mark, who really cares about him the most. Not that it was ment to be. Why don't you try Mark's point of view? I'd like to hear your take. Personally, I always thought "Prehaps it's because I'm the one of us to survive" really gave us an insight to who Mark is as a person. I always wondered what he was thinking as he said that, or if he thought about it at all. I think this is the longest review I've ever written. Keep writing, while I go get some tea

Favourite Line: "Ready to shield himself from the world as soon as it becomes too much"

Criticism: I feel like there's one last line needed for this fic. Perhaps "You disengage - And the road to glory is long gone." Or some reference to "One Song Glory" - which reminds me how long it's been since I've emerged myself into the world and music of Rent... Otherwise, fantabulous!

Very interesting to have it in 2nd person. Since I'm so unfamiliar to the fanfiction and the mindsets of all these characters, I'll have to jump back to this fic and give it a more proper view - but I absolutely adore the setting, the tense atmosphere, this whole "Missing Scene" feel to it.

Did I also happen to mention how I love how your profile tributes Rent and its influence to you. It made me all emotional XDD Sentimental-like... hm?

Ah! Another thing I liked - is Roger wanting to just one-up Mark. Having this whole Last Word. Sadly, he'll regret it, won't he? Even more sad - they're both right in their views in each other, just completely ignorant to their own flaws.

Ah... even now, as I mean to end this review - 'cause it's too long! - I find myself poking around the story, seeing something interesting.

Alas, though, I'll end it now! And with a rating of 8/10! Damn, that's good, too XDD

i like this story quite a bit. you did a good job getting into roger's head. :) thanks for posting!

I said I'd reveiw and I'm going to now:)

One word...Wow!

This is really good for a first story (better then mine...an over the top Mark/OC story called Only thing to do is Jump...*Advert!*). I like the way you've written it...can't remember the techinque name but I'm sure there is one lol...It is so in character on both parts...you should do the next part too with Mimi and Benny. I'd like to see that.

Great Job XD

Alright, That was phenominal. Firt off, I love how you wrote it in such a personal way. Especially the fact it's in the second person point of view. I absolutely love that and not enough people use it. It really makes the reader want to be in it. Its very sharp, very true. The mental blows are deep and cruel and it really makes you think about things. I loved it. You did really great for not being much a Roger writer. I think this is very in character. This was absolutely brilliant!

I love it. I wrote something very similar to this, but it's in first person, Roger's POV. My favorite stories are when authors can get inside the characters' heads, which is what you've done. Great job.

This was brilliant. Welcome to the sometimes-scary, always-entertaining world of fanfiction writing. I hope to see more RENT stuff from you down the road.