| Reviews for Mission Vao's Birthday bash |
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   Kirabaros chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 Okay I've had a barrel of monkeys with the laughter on this one. It was a well thought out piece with Mission wanting her own birthday despite the problems with the other parties that occurred. There were a few spelling and grammar issues but nothing serious. It was a piece well worth the read and had me laughing in a library of all places. Nice work Chev. |
| Ash Veran chapter 1 . 2/5/2011 Made me laugh. And Mission can definitely be a brat sometimes. |
| ChaosAngel4us chapter 1 . 8/26/2009 Cute! I love HK-47. The target part made me laugh. Please continue! |
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 8/24/2009 Great story! Though, you keep switching from third to first person. I hope to read more. God bless! |
| Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 chapter 1 . 8/23/2009 Way cute! Vey good job. |
| Angel of Melius Prime chapter 1 . 8/23/2009 Well here is your first review. Yay! I liked Bastila's message to Mission and HK's as well. they really fit their characters. PLease continue even if I am the only one asking. think of all the orphans out there that might die without ever seeing another chapter of this. *sniff* that would be tragic. |
