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*Pats on the head* very well done you sentimental fool, I myself love sentimental fools because I am one too! Actually someone did force me to read this, my inner yaoi loving fangirl self did and boy was she ever happy! Uke Sasuke is a secret (or not so secret I guess it depends) love of mine and I love that you made him uke-ish without going crazy overboard with it. It's just so darn cute! Finally one character in one book or story or narrative or something gets it! Communication is key! Talk to each other! Yes go Sasuke realizing that just talking to Naruto would have solved so many problems, they don't call him a genius for nothing i suppose. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us!

re read still good

This story is basically a huge, disturbing mix of rape apologism and Stockholm syndrome. Naruto raped Sasuke and then kidnapped him, and Sasuke is supposed to feel grateful because he didn't treat him THAT bad while he kept him captive? Naruto RAPED him! He should be thrown to jail for life for committing such a heinous and disgusting crime, he should be falling to Sasuke's feet begging him for forgiveness, and yet he acts like Sasuke somehow OWES him love?

And it's Sasuke who is constantly scolded and treated like shit for not wanting to love his rapist? And he even has to apologize? YIKES!

That "bond" stuff is not a good enough justification for rape. In fact nothing is a good justification for rape. The Naruto in this fic is a disgusting asshole. I don't know if you just love Naruto so much you feel like anything he does is justified and forgivable, or if you hate Sasuke so much you think he deserves to be forced into a relationship with his rapist.

Don't get me wrong, I think your writing skills are very good, I just hope this story doesn't reflect your morals in the real world.

very nice i laughed my head off at that ending too lol

Im sorry to say it but Sasuke's like teen different flavors of Stupid letting a creeepy ass geezer bite him without i dunno sensible reason.
Ah boy my poor Naruto

It was rlly good!

Random question, but what does kismet mean, and what is it's significance in regards to the story?

nice work

Pats on the head _

I LOVE THIS STORY! IT WAS WONDERFUL! -

LOVE IT XD

Yeah I'll agree the ending did come off kinda fast for the rest of the feel of the story, but it was ok. I loved the internal monologues from Sasuke those were amusing and caused for some laughs. And it was a refreshing change to see Sasuke as the inocent persuadeable character. Although his ability to get himself into on hair brain problem another frustrated me lol but that's because I had such a desire to reach out and smack him.

All in all cute story I loved it. Love the long chapters so made for less page turning hehe. The smut was left tastefully vague but I could have been plesently lulled into reading more detailed smut grins.

OHMYGOSH!

i just saw on your page that you have a oneshot coming out in 2 days, holy hell! im going crazy from excitement, this isnt good i have work in the morning and now i cant sleep! i blame you entirely for being an amazing author! i realize this isn't about kismet, but i dont have an account so i cant pm you, i just had to let you know how excited i am for this! i love your work, your a quirky writer with unique skill in developing plot and character! keep up the amazing work, i can't wait for you to be published!

by the way, kismet is one of my most favourite stories of all time, without a doubt!

I will msg you again when the oneshot comes out, thanks for the impending update!

p.s. now im even more excited for your future yakuza story!loveslovesloves!

Love Sasuke and Naruto's character here, Can't wait for the next chapter~