I really loved this. It was so poignant and heartbreaking and just when I thought it would have a horrible ending you surprised me.

You have such a vivid and unique style to your writing that I am really quite in awe.

Her laugh sounded like broken bells, her smile twitched at the corners of her lips, but still she was a sight to behold.

I am not sure why, but this sentence really stood out for me. I had to read it several times. :D

Your writing always provides the prettiest imagery.