I think this chapter deserves a lot of praise. What a great idea for a story. I really like how you've written these two characters. it is so sweet that Dirge refers to Starscream as ours and not just his. And the change in both him and Slipstream when they are together is so touching. I can see the clones could be a great support for each other during this hard time.
Thanks for writing. I can't wait to read more :)

I hope there's more to this!

I love this fanfic so much. It's written very well. Please update soon (:

rereading the story. Still love it alot. Thinking on this chapter though, if you ever come back to it and edit or rewrite it, you might want to change the terabytes data reference to something even biger considering that human technology now has Terrabyte hard drives readily available for anyone with the money to upgrade into they're computers. What's bigger then terrabyte? If a decabyte would be bigger I'd personally go with that since that'd be what 10 times bigger then a megabyte at least (math was never my strong point). If A Decabyte would be as big as I think it would be, by changing terrabyte to deca would make the story's technology remain advanced for possibly 10 or more years even at the current pace of technolgical advances.

So nice to have a fic that actually includes Dirge. Love the way you write him!

Okay, you have GOT to keep writing. After reading the first chapter, I had to read the next and the next until I just couldn't get enough. This story has been pretty thrilling and the characters are memorable. Some of them I wasn't familiar with and so I did some research. And in my opinion, it's not a problem at all that there are many characters involved. Somehow it's good.

And the use of all the words themsevles was just excellent, woven together skillfully. Well done!

I was disappointed when I saw that the last time this story was updated was in March. I hope you haven't abandoned it like many authors tend to do. It gets agrivating reading a story and not knowing whether or not you'll get to read the ending. So keep going, you're doing awesome, characters, plot, all of it. I'll be looking forward to an update soon.

Uh oh. Skywarp's got a leech! A space leech! Bum bum BUUUUUM!

Talk about draft-dodging!

It's nice to know that Thundercracker is smart enough to know the good in having someone loyal to you! And it's good that Skywarp can feel comfortable around someone!

Wonderfully done. I can't wait to keep reading this.

Hey, it's Candlewitch from LJ. I've been reading this fic since yesterday evening and I just want to say that it is completely awesome! Skywarp's love of cute things! Dirge's joy at being a mom-to-be! Stormshadow! Vortex's imaginary domme!Slipstream! I just want to squee about the characterizations and the epic world building. I just love it when authors go in-depth about Cybertronian culture, especially Decepticon and seeker culture.

And I can see why you suggested that my Skywarp should play games to distract him. I'm considering it, but my Skywarp isn't as focused as yours. I'm probably going to steal the idea that Skywarp loves cute things.

I haven't enjoyed a fic like I enjoyed this one in years!

Yay, Dirge is carrying!

I'm glad Scalpel is with Thunderblast too.

I can't wait for Thundercracker's fight and to see what Skywarp is going to do with Barricade.

I hope you update soon.

Still reading; still loving...Not good at giving reviews, because I never have anything constructive to say, but I like people to know I'm here.

And yeah, the RP is totally taking up all my time too :3 And I'm glad I have been reading this, since it helps me understand Slipstream better (This is Waspy-mun, BTW X3)

Uh...I'm slightly confused about the mechanics, but that's okay.

Oh boy, they better hope that Motormaster doesn't come back again asking for Deadend.

I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait to see more.

I'm not quite sure why this does not have more reviews. I am enjoying it immensely thus far, particularly the dynamics of the growing group.