I love the time jumps in this story- so effective! Overall, very cute and lovely! :)

AWWW NEJI WOULD GIVE UP THE WORLD TO PROTECT TENTENNNNNNN! SO CUTEEE

Awwwwwwwww that was so cuteee
*explodes*

Before I even read this fic, I need you to know you're very first sentence is missing a word. Please fix it, it's driving me crazy. "Been kind to her"

Lovely story! :) I enjoyed reading it!

It is very idealistic but I like it!

I liked the story. Tbh, I actually thought there was going to be a tragic ending because of the way the story was written, lol. I thought it was going to be like, Neji finally getting married to Tenten after giving up everything and then Tenten dying from an incurable disease after giving birth to a son. Idk why I thought that, but I did.

This was so heartwarming and beautifully written. I really loved how you described Neji being so caring and sweet towards Tenten. A truly amazing story :)

This fic is amazing

OMG. THIS IS SO GOOD. HOLY SHIT. THE WAY YOU WROTE THE HOSPITAL SCENE EVERYTHING WAS SO DAMN GOOD. The characterization, the character interactions, the subtle ways Neji shows he cares for Tenten, Tenten and Neji's relationship, the fact he'll give up everything for her - I LOVE IT. Thank you for writing such a masterpiece.

;; this is beautiful *sobs forever*

Oh wow, nice story

SOOOOOO MUCH ADORABLENESS ! Great job ! :') I loved the whole super protective Neji angle! And I loved In standing up for Hinata :) Wonderful writing!

So cute! So well written, I love the concept, and it does fit in pretty well with actual canon.

even if it sound "cheesy", "lame", "idealistic" im still lovin it :DDD btw thats what fanfiction is for, stories that "probably will never happen in two million years" ;)