Reviews for Book One: Sunrise |
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Blackmoon77 chapter 9 . 10/2/2015 please make more, but lay off the Erin Hunter story a little. I'd like to read what you write. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/9/2015 You got it all wrong the cats they chose where feather tail and she was not a apraintice crowfeather was but not her and stormfur wasn't chosen he just wanted to go whith his sister you got tawny pelt right thoe and brambalclaw but squirlpaw wasn't chosen either so bey! And check your facts ok? |
m-nevermore chapter 9 . 7/7/2015 My guess is... They would almost drown in the ocean and meet a badger named Midnight? My guess. |
Stealthy chapter 3 . 4/3/2015 Moon is not a valid prefix (Moonflowers an exeption) but good so far |
BBxRae forever chapter 9 . 1/27/2014 Please continue the story I love teen titans and the warriors the names for Raven and Beastboy are cool and good luck finishing the story Peace Out! |
Francisthedog chapter 5 . 7/6/2013 You must complete this story! It's pure gold! |
Emmagination chapter 3 . 6/18/2012 Hmmm... Don't you think that was a little too quick for raven and Beast Boy to become apprentices? I would think they would have to earn the clan's trust before becoming part of the clan. Owlpaw, really? Owls symbolize intelligence, and beast boy is not in the least even slightly smart. Also, you misspelled from. I'm just giving you some helpful tips. I like your idea, though. :) It has a good albeit a fast-paced plot. |
ofnisaofunsdf chapter 9 . 10/17/2010 RAWR I WANT MORE BBRAENESSSSSSSSSSSS! |
timedAquarius chapter 9 . 10/14/2010 please please please rite some more i love it so far i never want it to end but alas like all good things it shall! |
timedAquarius chapter 3 . 8/17/2010 I would seriously be so good in that situation i'd be like seriously you don't know what a clan is? I have the whole book series and I've read it at least five times! |
Kylar's-Apprentice chapter 2 . 6/19/2010 great so far! only things are the minor spelling errors, but everyone has those, as well as Beast Boy's about a year younger than raven... but it's your fanfic, i mean, you could have them 20 yrs apart for all i care! great start though! |
Saffire55 chapter 9 . 5/16/2010 I love it! Please make another chapter soon! What about the Titans though? |
Linzerj chapter 9 . 5/16/2010 COOL! IT IS EPIC! NICE GOING! |
Linzerj chapter 8 . 5/8/2010 COOL! Yay, BB and Rae are AWESOME! That's so cool how you made the fire purple and the tiger green from the prophecy... nice job! |
Gingerstorm101 chapter 8 . 4/23/2010 plz oh pretty plz update soon, i want to know what happens next |