You definitely are not the best at writing fight scenes. Your strength from what I can tell is writing fluff. The fighting in this chapter was super rushed and not at all well described.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This was so cute! Very interesting take on the Kyuubi and the Naruto antagonists all together :) Can't wait to read the sequel!

I’m very glad I read this fic. Your writing has improved a lot in comparison to the last one I read. I love this concept and the story is great. I’m trying to figure out how some of the things that happen in the story would logically happen. But I’m not taking that into account over all because that’s just my personal preference when reading Naruto fic’s. I like to read/write things that could happen based on the “fictional facts”, I suppose you would call it, of the worlds or ideas involved. It’s primarily why I don’t read AU’s. Especially modern IRL AU’s.

I’m heading to read the sequel now.
I’m super excited.

I will honestly admit I was mentally chanting make tsunade regret it, with pranks galore

Great job I enjoyed it a lot

Just finished reading it. It was a good one. Considering the time when this fic was finished, I must say you did a Damn good job brown phantom;-)

you did a very splendid work. I am motivated that naruto actually reflected on hinata it up
Will look for the sequel

I just finished reading this story and I really enjoyed it. I also have to say that I also agree with to many things you’ve said in the author notes you have. Sucks that they dragged it out with them finally dating then getting married and I’m glad to see stories like these around before the series was even close to being over with them dating and getting married.

Thanks for writing this and I’ll read the other naruhina stories you might have if I haven’t alread.

Naruto coming back to Hinata after Pein’s attack and acting on what she said, that’s should’ve been what happened in canon

FYI, Tsunade is a Senju. The Uzumaki are direct descendants of the Senju. So they actually are canonically related, even if it's a very distant relation.

Um... The Shichibi DOES have seven. The other 6 are attached to it's wings.

tsunade and naruto are related do to tsunade's grandmother being a uzumaki

You’re not very good at fight scenes, as you more told us what happened, instead of showing us.

Please stop with the text talk, through is spelled t-h-r-o-u-g-h, not thru.