opps, spot some typo. I show it to you: auburn-haired teen ager -TEENAGER

I think you are switching tenses at times. Well, I guess that can't be help. I do that unconciously too. T.T

lol~~ "he thought that a simple hood won’t cover his awesome appearance" how narcisstic of him. hahahahahhah~~

OHMYGOSH, THIS STORY IS SO CUTE!

It was a little OOC but it was all fun!

Nice, nice, nice.

Sarah THW

THIS IS A VERY CUTE STORY!