So sweet! OMG you nailed that campfire scene with their motions and the exact dialogue! Shows how attentive you are as an author :)

Aw! How sweet! Rock on! Loved this!

Awesome story!

Aww, my second favorite scene in the movie. (first is the "I'll never leave you" scene, of course :D) I just loved how Justin acted like such a sweet big brother, and I just about died when he said the "Because it's you and I" line. I mean, OMFG. And I loved when Alex thanked Justin, too. :) It was nice to see this sensitive and thoughtful side of her we rarely get to see in the show.

And that scene was when I started hating Disney for making them SIBLINGS! Two people with that kind of chemistry shouldn't be cast as brother and sister. Baahh.

Anywayy. :)) I really loved how you wrote this scene. You got almost every line right (I watched the campfire scene over and over in youtube and the dialogue just keeps ringing in my head whenever I think about it XD) and you just wrote and described everything beautifully. I was planning to write something ALMOST like this, but I know yours is so much better than what I had in mind. :)

Hope you write more soon :)

I agree with you, that was a super touching moment. very nice work.

Great Story!

I watched this movie on all three nights 'cause I'm a sucker for protective older brothers too lol

I always love the Justin/Alex's brother/sister relationship. I'm not a fan of insest and I wish there were more stories out their like this.

Awesome job!

You shouldn't have worried! You did great! I loved this story! I'm also a sucker for a cute, protective big brothers and Justin is just so darn good at it! And I LOVE that you did it with no incest. That stuff is just gross. Again, Great story!:)

i loved your story so much. thank you for not making it incest, ive been looking for something like this for a while, but all ive found is grossness.

Wonderful, darling, wonderful. I too am a sucker for protective older brothers.

That was super cute!

Excellent story

Bye

Great fic. I loved it. I watched the movie at least four times already. (Currently watching it now, actually.) Justin and Alex were adorable.

I've pretty much decided that wizards' powers are tied to their emotions, since Alex wasn't about to do any spells after Justin disappeared and she was crying too hard.

I'm a sucker for older, cute, protective big brothers too. And I loved all the brother/sister moments in the movie. The campfire was my favorite. The story was good but it was pretty much exactly from the movie.

Are you gonna make them love each other?

If you are I wouldn't like this story.

But it is good, now.

I was surprised how much I loved that movie!

Nice job!

I love your extension to that scene!

(that's one of my favorite scenes!)

Brother/Sister moments are the best.

I love seeing a weaker side of Alex

She's a lot sweeter that way _

ONLY THING THAT BUGGED ME:

You misused 'too' throughout the whole thing

It should be 'to'

It's not a big deal, really,

people will understand what you mean,

it just bothered me.

Other than that,

it was REALLY cute

and I loved it

...

I think I'll add it to my favorites

Ok, I'll stop babbling now _

-teenytinyturtle5

i agree. it's on again tonight, im gonna watch it. good story. i think selena is a much better actress than miley and the wowp movie should have been in theaters rather than the hm movie. i cried when selena cried, but when miley cried i was just like, 'really, that's the best you can do?'. good story.