I really liked this story. I had a lot of fun reading it.

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So dorky but so utterly adorable I love this

just one word AWESOME!

THE STORY WAS AMAZING AND I LOVED THE IDEA OF RENJI AS A VISORD! HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK SOON

awwww! poor kensei-kun!

Great fic, rather interesting

I really liked this story :) I have to admit though, I kinda like him better with Starrk than Renji. Not that Renji isn't awesome, but I just have trouble seeing the 2 hotheads making it long term, lol :) Hot sex yes, long term relationship, not really :)

TY for the story though, very kick ass :)

i love love lovee ittt!

please update soon :)

Bwahaha...Renji and Ichigo are so oblivious sometimes...good job! I loved it!

seriosly? rukia and matsumoto? ...

Nnoitra is so cute x'D

loved it.

Hah, I love Renji's reactions in this. I feel kind of bad for Nnoitra and Kensei, but at least it all worked out in the end for our main couple. I'm off to read the alternate version now!

Ack! I love this fic! Renji is so awesome! I really like him as a main character! And the plot is great! I also really like all the pairings here! Especiall Renji/Ichigo (it's not my OTP, even though I do read a lot of RenIchi, but it's because Renji is always great in Renji/Ichigo stories, while other fics can sometimes portray Renji as one demensional). I also really like the Ulquiorra/Orihime bits! And Rukia, I like that she liked Renji, and that she liked Orihime~ Also this fic had great moments:

LOL at Ichigo having a sexy Las Noches outfit, and also his moments with Halibel's fraccions.

Nnoitra and his relationship with Ichigo, I loved it! (I'm kind of surprised there is a Stark/Ichigo alternate ending, instead of a Nnoitra/Ichigo alternate ending, but I can see why since Nnoitra would never admit to being of the other persuasion)

And Tesla! Tesla is so awesome, and it's so cute that your puppy's name is Tesla, and its cool that it was coincidence!

Renji's moments of almost losing control, I could picture vividly his eyes changing colors and his voice changing 3

And Shinji! He was hilarious, especially the moment where he was saying his thoughts out loud about Hiyori.

And Il Forte interrupting Szayel because Grimmjow asked him to. Il Forte is 3

Also when Renji first says he likes Ichigo, LOL at him repeating it, I'm surprised he didn't jump up and down on a couch, lolz~

Also I like Renji's dorky proclimations, I always think they're cool, but then again, I make a lot of dorky proclimations as well!

The Renji/Ichigo smut was brilliant! So hot, and just damn awesome. I really like the moment when they were kissing and Ichigo took down Renji's hair (I dunno, I love the image of Renji's hair spilling down his shoulders)

All in all, awesome fic, and it's definately going in my favorites!

hey i loved it, can't wait to keep going