| Reviews for Now Who's Real? |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2017 Firechaseswater- would love to see this expanded and hoping Bella is real |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2015 Loved it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2013 How did you make him so nasty and an evil killer... And lovable? Great writing. Loved BELLA and EDWARD! |
 janaycullen1918 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012 this is a morbidly fan-fucking-tastic awesome fic u got here |
| RiverGold chapter 1 . 5/18/2011 This would be much better if you knew any words longer than four letters. And if you paid any attention to the basic conventions of grammar. It would be best if you did not overuse ellipses (...) quite so much. A good rule of thumb is "Don't ever use them unless you desperately need to convey the idea of a real vocal pause, because what you have is really fucking annoying." Dumb-ass and cock-sucking should be hyphenated. Gaining some insight into how real mental hospitals work and how real shrinks talk would not go amiss. Take that as you will. Usually, curious would go before nosy in the progression to dead, but I suppose that is really a matter of opinion. It is spelled 'Doc' Martin. The first letter of every sentence should be capitalized. You replaced 'she' with 'had'. And so on. The idea is really quite interesting. The execution is... shit. Better luck next time. |
| XlaraC chapter 1 . 1/24/2011 Very good. |
| Littlebug21 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011 *dreamy voice* wow, this was both dreadfuly deranged and hillarious at the same time. i love that Bella is the little companion that every body says is not there. i loved absolutely all of it! i really hope you won that contest, Edward was superb. :) |
| EBJvampy chapter 1 . 8/7/2010 So sadistic! Edward is fucking crazy! |
| EverRobsten chapter 1 . 7/21/2010 I love this story. I really enjoyed reading this. |
| Anonymous Goon chapter 1 . 5/4/2010 i feel kinda giddy now lol |
| like smoke in my lungs chapter 1 . 4/9/2010 "Now who's real, bitch?" I like that. Haha. |
| TwiFox chapter 1 . 3/15/2010 i love it keep writing ! |
| Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 3/6/2010 So I was searching for an o/s to rec on the jaspersnaughtygirls blog and I came across yours. I just finished reading it and I must say that you did an amazing job with this o/s. I really enjoyed it and I wanted to let you know that I will be doing a review on your o/s. Be sure to check it out, it will be posted tomorrow. Kathy |
| And I'll Set Fire To The Rain chapter 1 . 1/26/2010 i really liked it! hope you continue and update soon |
| my2galspal chapter 1 . 11/4/2009 Wow! That was a pretty wicked story. Thanks for sharing it and best of luck in the contest. |
