Ok, so thought it is quite short and doesn’t tell entire story of second year its end perfectly. Ginny has starting loosing herself. Loved how slowly and carefully Tom starts to manipulative Ginny.

It is not often when I 100% believe after reading fanfic that’s how it should have happened in canon. How much better and complicated Harry Potter could be if canonGinny remembered what she did, if slowly and unknown to her she is corrupted with Tom ideals and bitterness?

PS you should add note that your fic “Only a traitor” is complete. It could help others when they are looking for finished Peter/Bella fics.

This was really interesting, mostly because I think we have different takes on what happened to Ginny.

I really loved this piece, mostly because of how you portrayed Tom. The way he just slowly asked her questions - asked her why her brothers didn't let her sit with them. Just that type of slight implication that could lead to Ginny's downfall was really astounding.

But at the same time, I was more under the impression that Ginny never knew what was going on during all of this. More like she was completely taken over by Tom.

Either way, it's really good. Gosh I wish I had your talent.

I loved this! It was so beautiful!

this was so innocent and menacing at the same time, a great mix of the two

Very insidious, was Tom. And this picture is quite convincing... particularly the last scene, where Ginny is painting the message on the wall and just seeing the letters, not the words. You do a good, subtle job with her altered state of mind.

This was a really interesting read. The things you added coordinated perfectly with the story, except for the end part. I thought Ginny was supposed to be possessed when she wrote on the wall, so she couldn't remember what happened. Anyway, besides that, this was fantastic. :)

by the end of the story, i had chills coursing through me! it's amazing how you showed Tom taking over Ginny's innocent mind.

This story was amazing - from the realistic dialogue to the canon storyline you preserved (and expanded upon) so well, right down to expressing the feeling of being swept away by something bigger than yourself and getting lost. I could believe this story, believe that JKR might have intended it herself.

Everything just fit so well, flowed so smoothly.

I added you to my favorites list (something I do not do often) and had to let you know how perfect this story was. Keep up the wonderful work!

Amazing! The sheer weight of what was happening to her never really hit her; Tom really had her wrapped around his finger. I loved it.

Well written and in character.

I kept thinking about kids playing on the internet and getting sucked into something creepy... yah, it is easy to see how she could be sucked in, kids today do the same thing on line and they have been warned. Well done.

Amazing! Loved it! I never really thought of Tom/Ginny as a pairing, but it might be a new ship!

Wow...that was awesome. How he got into her head, got her to fall for him, tricked her...It's kinda scary. But a good scary, you know?

But this was crazy good on so many levels. Possibly my favorite of yours (besides the Lily one)

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Amazing oneshot, I loved it. It's great that you wrote about the missing scenes between ginny and tom in chamber of secrets. It was really interesting to see how tom started to manipulate ginny. Great job, well done!.

dis is really good :)

Wow, this is great! And sorry it took me so long to read. I've been dying to read it, but whenever I was on the computer(which really wasn't often) I always had something that I had to do in like five minutes. And of course when I wasn't on it, someone else was. :( But my wait is over and this is totally awesome! Like I've said before, I love the missing moment fics and this is the best one I've read (well except for your Lily/James stuff, but I don't think that really counts :D)! I love how you made Ginny slowly accept what Tom was saying throughout the story. And the 'diary dialoge' was so fun to read! I loved the memory too! I think the weird thing about this one is that my favorite part was the beginning. I just absolutely loved it! "That night is not the last." Brilliant! I also love the title and how it's like the theme of your fic because I never would have thought that Ginny was doing all that stuff because she thought she was helping Tom and Tom would help her in return.

P.S. - Congrats on reaching 20! And what a spectacular story to have for 20! :D