I read a lot of Merlin fics today- I'm in a bit of a Merlin kick- but this was very unique and refreshingly interesting! I enjoyed it a lot. I typically try and avoid fics with stuff like "sex demons" or "incubus" stuff in them because it typically strays into rape and dubcon shit, but this didn't, and you wrote the characters really well. The incubus itself was very interesting, especially how it realized that Merlin was Emrys and it tried to survive by telling Merlin it knew who his father was.
This was a great fic!
(Really liked the last three lines, too)

'He's my manservant and you can't have him.' Haha, well done.

Loved it.

That was great! Love how you built up their relationship first, and let us see how it all got started. And the whole incubus bit was just brilliant :)

I loved it, ur a great writer and the story line was amazing :)

That was funny and the pacing was done well. It was entertaining to imagine Arthur and Morganna sneaking drinks when they were younger.

Awwww! That was adorable! :)

Perfection :) Merlin and Arthur are my favorite couple (Gwen can have Lancelot) and a jealous Arthur is pure gold. I especially love how cheeky Merlin is, he's just adorable, and the whole scene with the demon and "Emrys" was epic.

Nice story :)

The 'Oh Merlin' part made me think of Harry Potter.. I giggle-snorted at that.. love the story :)

Possessive people are so fun to rile up.

Stubborn Arthur, cute Merlin. I like how it worked out in the end. Arthur caving. thx...gr

One of my favorite Merlin fics. Everybody loves a jealous Arthur ;)

I loved this. Now I want to see Arthur learn of Merlin's magic!

Wildfire

So cute! In this story Merlin father is an incubus right! Love, jealous posessive Arthur. I love at Arthur stubborness crack with only one kiss