This. is. just. beyond. wonderful...

Even though I'm aware this is an AU It somehow keeps a lot of the Final Fantasy VII world-feeling too it that I kept thinking half the time that this was playing out on Gaia.

Sepiroth seemed so in character and consistent to this same character all the way though£. And Page along with her family and Jhon Smoth. They were so weird but in a wonderfully unassuming way that I couldn't help to think that maybe out there there really was such a family. Not only that but PAge's circumstances were so curious, the way she lived alone while with her family living else where, her deeply fragile inner self surrounded by a rock hard facade and inspire of her overt physical frailty her uncanny luck for keeping safe inspire of everything along with an at times contradictory physical ability.

None of this we ever get an explanation to. By you know what. That is just fine, if anything it makes this tory all the better for it. Along with having AVALANCH pop up in the background with a few hints to their past but nothing with is elaborated upon. All of these unexplained things somehow just add an uncanny realism instead of plot wholes.

I'm in so much admiration for your writing skills right now. And somewhat every single character that made their appearance in this story, leaft their very unique impression on me. And the ones with most screen time, page and Jhon Smoth I have come to grow so fond of. Thank you for sharing these characters. Just. I can't seem to think of anything else to say other than thank you, thank you!

The progression of the romance between the too was so smooth and seamless to... Trully a joy and pleasure to see develop. With delicious moments popping up all over the place. Yum. :D

Well, ah... This waxing review is so embarrassing. Really a superb story!

Ok, so in a way Paige reminds me of Twilight's Bella with her clumsiness. Also, Paige's behavior strongly resembles that of a person who sustained a horrible trauma like sexual assault. She can't stand being touched. She shows no emotion although she has plenty. She wants to learn martial arts for protection ( and no way she needs martial arts to beat up the School Princess's guard). And why is Seph still around?

I like this story. It was not a sudden falling head over heels for each other at first. It was gradual. And it seemed to keep Sephroth in character, well as much as this type of story could.
I give it four stars(only because in the story summary it says the story will be revisited).
Will reside in my favorites.
Would have liked more explanation on how the world was different from canon, but I got the gist by the end.

Yay! I'm Canadian! :)

You scared the crap outta me with the whole Romeo/Juliet thing. I loved the ending. :)

Author-san, I love you. I'm just putting this out there but, I have never ever played the game Final Fantasy before and I'm reading the fanfictions.
Question: Am I a stupid fanfictioneer for doing that?
Answer: Yes.
Eh. An epilogue...? :3

What an awesome story; your writing skills are extremely impressive and I can't wait to read the rest.

Honestly I feel really bad for Solomon, he is just so sweet.

You're just ending it here?! XP

WOW!
-starts crying- that's...so...romantic!
-crys more-

BTW ;)
once i also dreamed that sephiroth was my P.E. teacher
and girls kept whispering and stuff. and a boy just like solomon! O.o
can you believe that? (O_O)

OMG! john smoth is such cute!_ and cool at the same time;)
i wish my parret could do that :\

I love it! It was so sweet! This is an awesome story! They are so used to each other's presence that they consciously fell in love with each other, not wanting to separate. I love it! Thank you for creating this great story!

Another story well done! I love the way you write Sephiroths character~ (everything Paige and John Smoth makes me snicker like an idiot) haha

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

that was fantastic! please make another SephirothxOCC! that was great, 2 thumbs way up!