The story seems great, but that perspective is...I don't know a bit distasteful. It's not terrible enough for me to stop, but it does bother me. I'm sure there are many that might like a character perspective, but I personally don't. That is my only gripe.

What is with the point-of-view? The story has a nice premise and all so far but you aren't Hinata .-.

Best naruhina fanfic ever read

Simple words...elegant storyline...nice...with a little added crisp penship it has potential to go to 100 chapters or sequels

Absolutely loved this. Did you ever make a sequel? I sure hope you did. inbox me the name if you did please.

Amazing one of the best ones ive read

Haha best chapter yet sasgay got denide g by all the girls there and got humiliated beyond beleive cutting into his gay im à avenger pride i love your style of writing and imagination 10/10 *gold star award deserves an osca keep it up

I love this chapter xD

Best Disclaimer xD

Hinata stands up to Hiashi! This was a great chapter to see the difference in Hinata. It should be fun to see where you take the story.

Wonderful first date chapter and the ending was just the sweetest ever. Naruto has always been a gentleman, especially with Hinata since she treats him so kindly in the manga. Even up to chapter 647 and including 615 where Hinata slaps Naruto to snap him out of his depression she is always doing what is best for him.

Very cool beginning here. I like the fact that Hinata gets along with all of her friends and Naruto is up-front with her from the beginning. Good start.

What's this nonsense about Hinata going to take the jonin trials while pregnant and the proctors being threatened to being nice to her?

Sorry but I can't stand that. It is a nice fic but has too many plot holes for my taste.

When were Akatsuki and Madara finished?

It's ironic that the combat between Obito and Gai turned different in the original.

Now we know why Rin was not there for Naruto all those years but it doesn't explain at all why she didn't tell Kakashi who were Naruto's parents or why Hinata can use so well that sword.