I died! I died! I Love this story!

Just reading this page makes me not want to finish the story, but at the same time I want to. You have made me cry with this story more than most stores expect one, my mom says that I'm an Empath so I can feel what the characters feel.
I hope you won't mind if I use some of your ideas from this story to come up with ideas of my own. :) ;)

This stort from beginning to end was amazing! I love angst!Yami and I loved what you did with the storyline. You did amazing at telling an AU of Yugioh and you kept the characters whole yet made them your own without going overboard. Great job! :D

OK, this is amazing!

Star: You say that about everything, Sis.

*blushes* That's because I know when a fanfic or book will be good!

Star: *rolls eyes and walks out* Whatever. Come on; dinnertime!

*nodding* Oh-okay... *looks back before leaving, gives thumbs up, mouths* Love the fic!

Hello Fated-Shadows, I just wanna say that i've been touched by your story, It's really great, well writing, And never seen something like that before, definitely amazing, I am an artist myself, I love to draw but I give up like 2 years ago and I deleted everything that are related to my art mostly YUGIOH!, Obviously this is was a stupid and selfish idea and I focused on what I thought was my Interests, forget my passion for drawing and all, And now I think this story has changed everything from my point of view, So without further burden, I ask, May i turn this story into reality by making manga, I'll draw it myself I'll put in DA and of course I'll definitely give you all right, What do you think?

Oh my lord, I absolutely love this story! I especially love the ending!
Geez, Yami is the king of angst. Is it bad that I love it? xD
Probably. Oh well.
Really though, great story. It was written beautifully and I love how much back story you gave Yami. Thank you for the read!
;3

One of my favourite yu gi oh fanfiction, this was so good ! It's been so long that I read fanfictions, I'm pretty exigeant by now, but this ? This is great. The plot was really good, the plot twists interesting and well employed, the characters true to the originals without being copies, the very fluide writing style... The fact that you actually tried to get your facts straight about Yami's condition is also really cool.
I see nothing to say on the negative part, maybe that it got a bit repetitive, but it's the problem with long fanfiction... It didn't make it less appreciable though.
And 1 for good traitment of homosexuality/bisexuality discovery and homophobia.

Yeah, that's pretty much all. Thanks for the work you've done :)

WHY YOU WRITE SO MUCH ANGST?! AAAAAARGH!

Anyway, serious, now. This story was excellent, and Yami's trauma seemed realistic. I really wanted to review such an amazing fic with profound words and a detailed explanation of what I thought of it, but I'm at a blank; this story has a lot of impact all the eay through. All I can really say is... Beautiful writing.

Oh my gosh, crap, why does stuff after stuff always has to happen?! D:
This story is always getting worse and worse before it gets better. Seriously, if I were Yugi and Yami, I'd be like fuck my life, fuck my life hard!
Just Ra, give them a break already! I mean damn, they don't deserve this :'(
Your story, I swear...too many feels and happenings xp

Well, yes your right, Yugi's mom is only trying to protect him, but still..
None of them know what it's like, even though they try to help, listen, understand...it's just something u can't explain, only hope, pray, that in time it will get better, that everyone will accept and stay with u, but at the same time u know u can't possibly ask them to do that...
And Ra, I am sounding so pessimistic aren't I? Sorry, but the feelings Yami is going through, is stuff I've gone through, heck still going through! It is hard, dealing with that. Trying to be strong, pretending and trying that by some miracle u will be okay. Plus, like him I also have anxiety issues and PTSD xp
Your story is lovely with all its angst xD
Loved the playful part betwen them so kawaii! I just know that somehow, someway, Yugi will help Yami! If not I will come to your house at night and freak out on u! xD okay, this review got long, so ending it here! :)

Wow, this was so sad, I had tears at my eyes at several points, because I know exactly how Yami feels. Though u don't want to admit it, the fear that's always there, always running, hiding, looking for a way out. Pretending, no wishing, that u were strong, that you'll be okay..
Amazing work

Wow, poor Yami! :(

Oh Yami, u baka! Why do u have to run and then dat ending D:
Still, Ican understand him. Always feeling ttapped, having now way out, feeling like yojr just letting others and yourself down..

Wow! Freakin Yugi what a boss and so brave! Honestly I've never been in a fight, and I don't like violence, but if I have to I will fight to defend myself. My friends, probably too. Lol
And awww, they are so cute together, but grrrrr! Yugi's mother. Ra, hate her!

Wow. I really like Yami's mom. She seems so confident and strong, u know? I like that. It's obvious she cares so much and respects her son. Now, Yugi's mother on the other hand...I kinda just want to slap her. Scratch that I do! I mean, c'mon! Just wow. Knowing them, I don't think they'll really break up right? I mean it's just wrong and messed up! I know they'll find a way to make it work! They just have too! Otherwise, I really will get into the story, I don't care if it's impossible, and bitch slap someone while screaming at their face! xD