That was so dark and enthralling and intense and just so very good. Their fight towards the end of season 2 was so charged and I loved reading an alternative where there is actual fallout from both of their words to each other. But Gene is right, Alex needs him.

Painfully wonderful. How on earth you can write like that, I don't know, but it's amazing. I'm just *so* glad she didn't walk away!

Wow.

So powerful I think I need some heart tablets now. Brilliant writing throughout, and the flashbacks were great. Love it.

Jazzola

Corr. That was brilliant! Very angsty. 10/10, especially for the ending XD

Loved this story. A very angsty piece indeed. I hope series three will give them a little a chance of happiness. Although, I read that it has a really sad ending, according to the head writer, but a brilliant one , I'm sure!

Wow you wrote that amazingly : )

Im glad alex stayed : )

xx

One of the most intense fics I've read for a long time. It was so in character, I could see it playing out in front of my eyes.

Simply amazing. Delicious, painful angst. Brilliant as always.

Wow, that was amazing! I was on the edge of my seat until the very last sentence.

That was...beautifully upsetting. I loved it. Perfect :)

This is an amazing story. You really do write incredibly well, I could see and feel every scene. Gene's desolation, and Alex's dispair at being tied to him, were perfectly described. What sort of a bleak future would they have in your world? Perhaps we're better not finding out.

Good luck with going back to college, and I hope you find time to squeeze in a bit more writing in between your courses.

This was so stunning and sharp and beautiful.

"She’d already taken everything else...from this moment on, he was unconditionally hers." - I just...gah! Very good.

Wonderful, another magnificent story from the Queen of Angst! I just don't know how you do it. Full of passion and power and pain, hopelessness and despair, nailing why and how "your" Gene and Alex are irrevocably bound together, to destroy one another. I can't imagine why you don't like it, it's brilliant. I want more from you like this.

Beautiful, you had me in tears!

Beautiful, wrenching story. I'm in awe at how you capture the characters and tap into their deepest thoughts and insecurities and desires. Just wonderful.