While this was very hot and making Bella 18 barely slides by the pedophile-esqueness of this story, I am more disappointed with Carlisle and Esme ending up together at the end. Weird? Yeah, I know it is, but I preferred the non-canon aspect of this story.

Poor Carlisle having such a difficult time for such a long time. He was doing so well with keeping to his morals, like with not messing with Esme because she was married. Then he is confronted with his "wet dream" and did well up until Bella was practically naked on his bed and begging him to give into his desires. He even did all he could to not indulge at that point, but then Bella pressed her lips to his and all inhibitions were lost.

Thanks for sharing your story.

Hey Becky, I really like your kinky dr. can you please write a few more chapters?

awful ending. Crap story

FUCKING FANTASTIC ! one of ur lines got me in trouble though lmao i said it to a friend n omg did he through a tantrum it was bloody funny xD

go carlisle!fab story.

I likey! You are a big perv too, lol! ;)

Very hot!

/ungh dayum

Uhh hell yes is all I have to say...fuckhawt!

the first non-canon story I like so pretty pleaseeeeeee continue this! even if only for one chapter :)

Naughty Daddy C. Nice smut. LOL.

That was hot and I think I really really like Pervy Carlisle :) He deserves some loving too! :)

Great job! :D

Wow! Amazingly hot! Bad!Bella is such a delicious little tease. :D

dirty dirty dr daddy c . . but ya it was kinda really hot lol

Very Nice

That was a lot of fun!

:o)