This is simply wonderful. I love the way you've mixed the past and the present, and whilst the present part was excellent, it was the past that absolutely fascinated me! This is such an interesting way to tackle Renly/Loras and I have to admit that I am a huge fan of this manipulative, taking advantage version of Renly. It's never how I imagined their relationship to be, but it works so well. I can see Loras being blinded by his adoration for Renly, he does come across very much so as that after all, in the books, after his death.

There were so many lines that I loved, but here were some of my absolute faves!
Renly laughed low and rich, and said I have wanted you since tonight, Loras, is that good enough?
and Renly kissed him again and told him to turn over, please, he wanted to take his lover again,

Renly's callousness combined with Loras' innocence just is wonderful. Just brings tears to my eyes.

What do you mean Renly slept with other men and had other lovers? That's not true. He only loved LOras when he first met him.

I have a lot of feelings for this fic. It's just so beautiful and mournful and sad and .

IT'S PERFECT, REALLY. Props to you for making me have feels.

Very poignant. And an interesting take on their relationship. Poor Loras, such childish innocence.

Wow, this was very well written and beautiful fic. I wish I really had more to say on it, but I'm so tired and braindead right now I can't make a proper thought process. But anyways, great work. I'd love to see more Renly/Loras fics from you. :D