This fucked me up. :\

Holy Fuck.

So I don't know if you even peek at these reviews anymore, but GOD did this fic made me cry. It might sound a little dumb, but I think Brock's death broke me the most. But overall, I loved this story so much.

(I'm glad Brock didn't have to witness the other horrors of Acheron though, as sad as I am that he died.)

This was an amazing fanfic! It was really intense and I couldn't stop reading it! At one point you said you weren't too sure about your action scenes, but I thought they were awesome! The one with Gyarados in chapter 9 was my favorite!

Thanks for writing this!

This was a fantastic story! I'm usually pretty good when it comes to gore and the like, but your descriptions had me gagging a bit.

I am surprised you fit so many words into a 12-ish hour predicament for them, because it seemed so much longer with how pulled in I was.

Either way, bravo and well done

i cant im crying already no please why am i reading

I was horrified when Brock was the first to go. I bawled when you killed Pikachu (did you really need to torture the poor kid? I know it was needed but damn that's like loosing a pet dog or cat). I knew Jessie was bound to die. But...when I got to Ash...THAT nearly got me to stop reading this fic. My god this was goddamn torture to read through but I pushed myself to read more because I wanted to see if Misty, James Meowth and Togepi would even make it through the story. I had never been more satisfied to see the deaths of Giovanni, Vincenzio, Butch and Cassidy, ESPECIALLY Butch and Cassidy. I really wished you kept

By far, this is one of my favorite Pokemon fanfics. I had never wanted to stay up to read a Pokemon fanfic before. I really hope there's some sort of one-shot where we get to see what happens to Misty and James, I desperately want to know how Delia and Brock's family take the news on what happens to their kids. Bravo with this story...just...bravo. I'm at lost for words and I can't even think of a good critical because I'm still trying to take in all of the details including Ash, Brock, Jessie's and Pikachu's deaths...

,,v you want me to pick up the phone with my dad and she said

Wow. Just ... wow. This fic is really, really great and I'm stunned, terrified, touched and so much more.
It's just incredible what you did in this story, not only with the characters, but also how advanced and well thought through this all is. I can't even find words to descripe it.
I mean at the beginning I thought: "Okay, there are zombies everywhere, but our heroes will come out alive." And I know how naive that sounds, but I just can't help myself. Than Brock died ans it was really sad, but I did understand it. Than Pikachu died and I swear I never cried so hard because of a fictional character in my life. It was terrible and it did hurt so much to see Ash fall apart by this. Not only losing his best friend, but also seeing him getting eaten by those monster.
And I really wanted to stop reading, I reallly did, but I just couldn't. It was so thrilling and I was already to deep in it to see all this different character handle this situation, fight against those monsters and trying to stay alive while also keeping themselves sane at the same time.(like Ashs trouble seeing his Pokémon kill all those zombie pokémon and how he had to remind himself that they're not alive anymore) Although I must admit I'm kind of glad for how Ash finally died (a hero in his own means; sorry if this doesn't really makes sense, english isn't my mother tongue). The same goes for naturilly for Jessi and Nina.
I just want to congratulate you for this amazing fic even if it's sometimes hard to read how all this well known characters (humans and pokémon) are dying and what they have to go through in this one night. You really did an excellent job of discribing not only this horrible situation in the city, the zombies and those gruesome monsters, but also the different emotions of our heroes and their foes, their motivations and their final moments. And I really like your writing style, how you can describe a situation, a place, an emotion, a character without it being too distracting for the reader or breaking the tension. This really was one hell of a journey!

Dude, great fic really well written. The turning point for me was Pikachu's death, that shocked and effected me the most, and from then on I knew no character was safe. It was also, the absolute cruellest thing to do to Ash, to have to witness such horrific and painful demise of his best friend, so like, top satoshi sadism writing there

Now i want to see Misy & James adventures as a sequel

Oh. Oh. Oh. I... I actually don't know if I expected that to happen or not... On one hand, this is very much the 'anyone can die' kind of story but on the other hand, I just didn't think you'd do something like this... Wow...

Holy shit. I haven't cried like this in a while. It was well written and the story was great, you know, minus the horribly depressing ending. I know it's supposed to be hopeful, but damn. Misty is strong enough that she'll be okay, but if it were me, I wouldn't be able to move on. Geez. My eyeballs hurt now. I need to watch something happy.

Fuuuuuuuck. In reading this at work and I had to pop into the bathroom for a short break. So many feels

This story was amazing, simple as that.