Awesome start wish it was continued

Write some more please

This is not M-rated!

oh please keep writing this story, there's great detail about what happened at the end of the game.

-flinx

I liked it, actually. Though I think it was a bit odd/out of character when Luke asked to be her boyfriend and Tear exclaiming "Yes, yes!" But besides that, I thought it was really good in a whole~

That was pretty interesting. The writing is detailed and your style is quite a nice change of pace from the other fics around here. You should continue.

My god!that was so pretty,i loved it!it had a peaceful feeling about it the whoe tym!LOvely work,i really was scared when i saw the summary abt luke choosing someone else!

Love reading anything with LukexTear, especially post-game stories :)

Just wanted to give a few suggestions though if you didn't mind. I think using the term "false princess" to describe Natalia carries a bit of a negative undertone, especially in a fic of this nature. I think it would have been better to just call her "Kimlascan princess" or something of that effect.

Also, it might have been better to use other names to describe Tear rather than calling her "brunette" all the time :p Just makes it a little redundant, that's all.

As for Natalia being saddened that it wasn't Asch...well, to be honest, I think by the end of the story in the game, she has already more or less overcome his death. Of course, she'll miss him, there's no doubt about that. But I think Natalia's a stronger person than that and she pretty much confirms her resolve right before the party was about to fight Van. Well this is just my opinion so you don't have to listen to it if you don't want to.

Well I'm not sure if you plan on continuing this but I look forward to reading more if you do :)

Well, we need the next chapter! And about the reunion... There are so many fics that started when Luke returns. So, I hope you have different version of what will happen next!