Really really good! You captured their voices so well. Me likes!

Aw, that was so sweet, the perfect dosage of the Doctor and Rose...I needed that, thanks. How incredibly lovely. And the Doctor and Rose...you write them SO well! "I’m sure he’d look quite nice in a cowboy hat." Haha, I love that! And I love the way she tells him, and the way she doesn't need to hear it because she knows. Oh and what was that other line...the just plain beautiful one...oh yes: “You don’t ever have to worry about me going off with Jack and leaving you alone. You never have to worry about me going off with anyone. I told you that I’d stay with you forever and I meant it. I still mean it. I’m Rose and you’re the Doctor and it doesn’t matter if there is one more person on the TARDIS or twenty. It’s always going to be the two of us.” This story was plain win! More please?

Aw... I luv it. :) Very believable.