I am re reading this story for the hundredth time! It is so good!

Very well written as always 3

Oh shit I saw this coming!

YAS! Tis rare! I love it! I can see Gaara being jealous as fuck XD

It seems odd to address the nine-tails as such, his name is Kurama, though I suppose you can call him whatever you want.

Everyone characterisation is perfect, except Gaara, who seems a little too... loud, I guess? I can't imagine him shouting or swearing, for example. And I've noticed that you're using Kami in place of God, which is fine, but doesn't really refer to a specific deity, so it comes across as a little awkward. Your description is good and clear, however you should be wary of using the same word too often too close together; especially within the same sentence. The pacing flows naturally, if a little fast, and it reads very well. There are no noticible grammar or spelling errors.

You did polyamory very well. I didn't think I would like it but it was really good.

Poor Kankuro. So that's what happened to him? Hmm, I was thinking it might've been Sasori.
Oh and in other news... Yay for GaaNaru!

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Aw,'Gaara x Naruto is so cute and full of fluffyness! I'm sure that Gaara will make Naruto feel all better in no time.

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I thought Kankuro was going to kill Naruto! I'm happy that Gaara got there in time. Aw, Naruto's in need of some cuddling and he picked the wrong person to do it. Hahaha! Poor Gaara, I'm pretty sure the boy's never cuddled before. Everyone was always to scared of him to even hug him.

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Kyuubi kicks ass! Haha! Poor Gaara. Having to go through an uncomfortable situation (his crush sitting on his lap) like that. Thank God that Kankuro didn't saw them! I really don't want him to use Crow. That thing has a bunch of knifes in it. It'd be like watching a Saw movie which I loathe and hate! Phew! Better not make Kankuro angry then.
*gasp* I hope Kyuubi doesn't do anything too bad.

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Kankuro was raped!? Oh boy! No wonder he's like this. He won't admit he was raped so he likes to dominate others and control them to forget about what happened to him. And that last part?
YES! I totally didn't see it coming but, I can honestly say that it was a very nice surprise.

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Damn girl (or boy) you have a gift for writing lemons! I never get tired of them. Haha! I'm beginning to think that Kankuro is a nymphomaniac. And yeah, maybe Kankuro's just thinking about Naruto as his personal puppet who he can play with and own.

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Whoa whoa! I think you went a little overboard there, Kankuro. Lighten up man. Naruto just blushed because, he was embarrassed.
Aw, Temari is always such a good sister to Gaara. I think she gave him pretty good advice and calmed him down a little.

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Wow! Kankuro snapped! Is it weird that I find this jealous and posessive Kankuro hot?

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