Naughty!Leanne :) Very nice fic!

- Kitty

haha leanne, you naughty thing, you!

i love naesala's attempts to insult himself. just too sexy... oh darn.

lovely job. :)

Very nice. VERY nice. _ Leanne, you dirty girl. I always knew she was something like this.

It should be Leanne/Naesala instead!

She is really strong-willed, but a lot of people seem too distracted by her pretty and innocent appearance. Love how you portrayed her!

Ravens loved gold. No wonder he’d always had a thing for Herons.

This line! XD

COOL~!

I love your writing; I love Naesala/Leanne; and I love Naesala so all of them together is GREAT!

I enjoyed your use of Naesala's attempted insults at himself. Especially the "really wears those clothes well" one, because I don't even see how that could be construed as an insult. (Although I guess "so sexy it hurts" isn't either; maybe "so sexy it's a curse" would have given the punchline more punch/incredibly lame pun)

This was really nice. I enjoyed every word. Thank you!

Aww... you write one of my favorite, underappreicated Fire Emblem pairings so well. I especially loved when Leanne offered to protect him. That just made me laugh, because I'm trying to picture it. I can't really, but it's still cute.

Great job with the one-shot!