Totally hilarious. I can't believe I actually made it to the end XD
There were still some mistakes :P

What's ax? (Don't tell me it's supposed to be axe)

I was laughing so hard, it was silent. I'm not even joking. "Let me take care of you cut that's what awesome brothers do" I can't.

Round of applause!

Lol , it was supposed to get worse! I thought you were going to invert the joke and actually have it become worse as it went on, but your playing it straight. either way, I'm still grinning at this. "Beta notes"

Before I even go on to chapter 2, I'm already lolling, so I wanted to say thanks for this. Do you know how ridiculous this is?! LOL Epic LOL.

Seriously. Ha. This is a proper joke. Thank you.

how to publish? i have written it but how to upload?

ROFLMAO! Luckily, there are hardly any badfics in this fandom. Another reason why I love it so.

m! Champagne!

Another spelling mistake : It's "Axe."

but still, i'm laughing. (and stuuff.)

haha. I am laughing now!

but something slipped from the Beta.

it's spelled "Rifle."

gr8 result...keep going if you want wouldn't mind to know how to write humour as i ain't good at that...

YAY! :D lol

I like the line about a new definition of "just fine" LOL cracked me up

even though it was a small example-like story, I liked it :D lol

good job!

What a good teaching experience!

Moi loved the story. And thank for explaining the children subject, it really confused me that much I didnt saw the real plot hole. lol

Yeah, it would be great if you keep going. Whatever, as long is no angst. Because even if I'll feel really tented to read because is you, I won't do it.

Cannot take that crap anymore. A least for a while...or till Dean and Sam start acting like true brothers again in SN. *Fucking knuckleheads*

*hugs and kisses for you*

Yohko B.

A very unique and giggle worthy effort here. It's especially amusing as I was just talking to a friend of mine about how some fics are posted with only the minimum of editing effort, or worse, none at all. Thanks for the lesson. I appreciated seeing the evolution from the first "draft."

Keep writing!

Eleri

Loved this... very cool. I'll review two in one: the second chapter was so fleshed out from the first that I didn't actually realise they were the same till I was half way through! Love the random input of "evil ghosty", lol.

Third chapter was awesome. Cool that you took both Dean's POV as well as Kevin's... and the continuous theme of being a hero. :D

I'd be pretty interested in reading more...

Yay! Now I know how to write a fanfiction. And not sound like an idiot, but sound like you. lol. 0_o Just kidding. Great job!