Dear hunted Lion Mellon-Nin,

this is a great story, (have you been rooting around in my head?) I have a similar story that is close to my heart that I haven't written because of time but yours is magnifique Many simirils for you!

but the spelling errors make it hard to enjoy it

for instance:

Another celebration was held to make Melannen and Erestor's bong official. I'm sure you meant to type bond an elf's marriage, not a bong, a pipe for weed.(elves hate pipe weed ask Gandalf or Aragorn) :)

I hope my constructive comments are okay. I don't mean to flame but point out something that could be easily fixed and reposted. and if you ever find anything like that in my stories, please let me know .

wonderful written iam happy finally to find a erestor love story with no slash in it...i would like to read more like this

ok, here goes, first review for me and for this very deserving story!

I really like your story line. The plot is very attention grabbing, and I like your descriptions. Maybe another story with the same characters? I'd like to read another story with them. My cohort Cairistiona also likes it!