i read it. again. (loved it again, too) i found myself thinking about what it would be like for matt once he ran away from the other orphanage he was transferred to and how he would've grown up. really learned about the world, you know? just hoping to spark your imagination. :)

mello strong, mello fearless, mello faithful. like i said, nothing can kill mello until hes finished living! sometimes i find myself hating myself because if i were in his position, id never be able to do what he does. sigh. still love him, still love you.

i am so happy. so, so very happy. you'd better actually read your reviews for how much work i've put into them. lets see... i think it would be reasonable to assume that i have reveiwed you 50-60 times, not using the same name every time, of course. anyway. mello is amazing; we all know that. he's a little like david from the story of david and goliath in that he has so much faith in God. i love that about him. wuvs ya! slán.

damn, this is great

Really well done! I like how well you described this incident from Mello's point of view, with the adrenaline rush and religious references. Poor Director Yagami! At least Mello wasn't a bee-otch about it! Could you message me sometime and swap ideas or something? That would be awesome!

-Vegetaworshipper

This has got to be the best Mello story I ever read... I'd never really considered the entire hideout raid from his point of view, and this is such a believable interpretation of it. 3

Amazing! I love it! I can't wait to read more!