YES!
the ship is real

this, is, awesome. Something interesting I noticed that kinda reminds me of the games is that link mostly is quiet when others are around. almost like he only spoke between cut scenes in the actual game and we just weren't there to see it XD

Okay ConGie, I want to start off by saying that I really liked how you set everything up. The story is compelling, and you've kept to the established characterizations very well. The only negative thing I have to say is that I think introducing Zorn was a mistake. He's pretty alright as OC's go, the only problem is how you made him the person who defeated your main villain a thousand years ago. That instantly made Link obsolete. First, even if the bad guy is way stronger this time, Zorn will be the only logical choice to take point on fighting him, which should be reserved for the main character (Link). Second, you've set up your villain to be a lot worse than Ganondorf was as villain, so bad that Zorn was made a Sage for beating him. This means that he will be so much more skilled than Link that he may as well replace him as the destined Hero. Third, his "Control Nature" power pushes him into the "Minor Deity" category. What problem could he POSSIBLY have trouble with? No enemy can stand against him now! Also, what part of being the Water Sage includes being able to carve away STONE? Why can he control anything but water? Why can he control anything at all? The sages were never shown to have dominance over their particular element, and if they did have that ability, wouldn't Nabooru be able to, like, steal someone's life force or something? You can't just say that your guy has powers because he's a sage, and not give those same powers to all the other sages. Basically, Zorn is a massive plot hole that is overtaking all of the interesting characters I started reading this story for.

One thing that I'm not sure about is your timeline. I'm not sure what you've looked at, but the official timeline leading to Twilight Princess begins at Ocarina of Time. At the end of OoT, Link can either go back to the time when he was a child and live on from there, or stay as an adult. TP falls along the timeline where Link stays as a child. In this timeline, Link travels to Hyrule Castle, warns the people about Ganondorf's true intentions, and Ganondorf gets arrested (this is what leads to that scene in TP where the sages try to execute him). Ganondorf gets to corrupt and empower Zant, and Twilight Princess begins. The other branch, where Link stays an adult, Ganondorf comes back after Link dies, and the Goddesses are forced to flood Hyrule to keep Ganondorf away from the Hylians. This leads to Wind Waker, which ends with the King of Red Lions using the Triforce to kill Ganondorf and himself. Wind Waker goes directly into Phantom Hourglass, which goes directly into Spirit Tracks. Twilight Princess can't be along this timeline, because Niko (who is in all three of these Toon Link games) gives a summary of the last Toon Link game at the beginning of the subsequent games, meaning that they are all consecutive adventures, and by the point of Spirit Tracks technology has obviously advanced to the point that Twilight Princess Coming after it would be like us going from iPhones to telegraph lines. I suppose it doesn't matter that much, but I'm a bit of a stickler for details.

Awesome story so far. I LOVE IT! Update soon please :-)

best wrighter ever

best story ever

It's emotional,heart breaking in a great way I love it,it's a great fan fic nice job.

I found this one day and fell in love with the story. why have you stoped on it?

Zomg i remember this fanfic the very first one i ever read... jesus that was like, 1-2 years ago... thank you addicting me to the wonderful world of fanfics! :D

I just read through this entire work, and I must say, I'm impressed. I came here through your Youtube channel, and made an account just so I could follow this story.

Keep up the good work.

Pray tell why this hasn't been updated in over 2 years?

Hah, blond. I see ahat you did there

Make More! I also love how all your fanfics tie in. How does it feel to be creating your own damn world?! Most people can dream about it. You can DO IT!

N.D.J.

Omg I freaking love this!
I found the end of twilight princess unacceptable :(
So I looked up some things on YouTube and found your midna x link montage (loved the music by the way) and looked at the description and saw your fanfiction and I loved it
Please keep writing I'm hooked !

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