OH MY GOD
YAOI JUTSU WHEN THEY YURI DIDN'T WORK
I'M FINISSHHHEEEDDDDDDD
So far I love how this story both tugged at my heart and then proceeded to have me laughing my ass off at 2am. Confused as to why it's not more popular

CHINA! NO PAIN FOR MY PRECIOUS BABY! "a fruitless effort" oh good God it was so sad.

And I find it hilarious how they're all terrified of the allies for whatever reason. "AHHH IT'S RUSSIA!"

The FEELLLLlllllllllllllllsssssss

I'm literally crying right now

WHAT ABOUT SOUTHEAST ASIA!? I KNOW THAILAND IS PART OF IT! BUT HOW ABOUT THE OTHER COUNTRIES!? LIKE PHILIPPINES! OR SINGAPORE!? OR MAYBE EVEN INDONESIA!? WHY WONT PEOPLE PUT THEM IN THEIR STORIES!? TTTT

This story is amazing ! I have been looking for a Hetalia Fanfic with a good amount of fighting scenes for some time, and I finally found this ! The characters (other than the main ones), also got enough scenes for each of them, and that's cool !

And then, this is my another reason to stick with this story : No Yaoi. I fully respect you for keeping yaoi out of this story, as I'm not comfortable with that content either _

Then for the grammatical errors, do I mind it ? NOPE ! As long as I know what is being said, grammar errors don't matter to me, as I myself probably didn't spot some of them at the first time, ehehe... (but you should write 'definitely', not 'deviantly'. Those two words have very different meaning, ehehe...)

Anyway, great work ! I love it _ _

It had probably gotten to you that this was posted on a fourm as the most boring and tedious Hetalia fanfic ever.

Don't listen to them.

Firstly, the most boring and tedious Hetalia fanfic ever is probably a fluffy romantic crack-tastic-but-not-on-purpose USUK fanfic. I'm sure.

But I LOVE this story.

Now it is LOADED with bad grammar and awkward interactions. But so is my favorite fanfic of all time. I can forgive something if I like what HAPPENS IN IT.

This is a wonderful, awesome story. It has amazing action sequences that I wish I could do, and it's just a really entertaining ride. I love it.

I respect you keeping yaoi out too. I read your profile and I understand. Although when you try and take yaoi out of a Hetalia fanfic, it sucks some of the life out. Hetalia being the way it is. But I didn't really pay attention to that here. I'm a yaoi fangirl just like 99.98% of the Hetalia fandom. But I don't mind that you chose to keep it out.

This is one of my favorite Hetalia fanfics of all time. I just wanted to tell you that. XD Bye

...I was somehow expecting England to use magic...But boxing works too! It is your story after all...(for so e reason, that doesn't sound nice...I'm sorry if i hurt you...I'm just really bad at picking words...)

This was a very good story. The beginning was Shakey but I could see improvement throughout. Although some things like the whole fighters mediation waS a little unbelievable and rather out there but other wise was a good story and well done

This one just cracked me up. Yuri Yuri Jutsu and Yaoi Yaoi Jutsu are the best techniques i have ever heard in history! You rock!

Where's the "VODKAAAAA" ?

I cried...so heart-warming...

I agree with GilbertArthurandLukas below. Your characters are OOC, they are not the UN (if they were, why are they meeting in Hong Kong?), the gross grammatical errors hinder whatever plot there is, and you just can't eliminate the subtext.

If you haven't read it yet, there's a sporking at whygodwhy*dot*org/t1795-most-boring-and-tedious-He talia-fanfic-ever

Such an awesome story! Never once that this adventure really send me on the edge of my seat! Besides with the long paragraphs thing, you were great! Amazing! Truly Amazing! I love America's antics, Italy when his mouth is on fire and Romano for being so funny along with China when he REFUSED to jump from the plane! Great job there mate! Awesome story!

OH MY GOSH! This was the most exciting tic ever written in hetalia! For the first time I've seen there is no romance whixh is good, but just a wonderfully action packed plot full of surprises. All the countries were in character and I loved seeing how you portrayed them. The feel of family and forgivesness was a beautiful touch. May this fic remain a classic forever! I ABSOLUTELY, FREKING, LOVED READING THIS. IT MADE MY DAY! thanks so much for writing this.

*bangs head on the keyboard*
This is probably the third time I've reviewed this sad excuse for a story. If you'd done this on the HP fandom, it wouldn't've stood out much, but Hetalia...well, it's just so bad I want to throw something (read: a rock or my LA binder) at you. I could not bear through the first chapter, and even though the subsequent chapters are 'better,' I dunno...this really ruins it for me.
I'm sorry for being so harsh, but seriously. Fix this chapter and avoid making characters OOC (namely, Canada. SERIOUSLY...). Just a suggestion. And don't put the key for "talking" and all that. We like the story to be something you would probably write in an English class, thanks. Don't need anything the key mentioned.
AND THEY ARE NOT THE GODDAMNED UN. They're literally THE WORLD. The meeting is the WORLD CONFERENCE. Oh, and Domo and Umo are very unlikely names for hurricanes (they're usually real names that a parent would pick for a child), but that's nit-picky, so you don't have to change the hurricane names.
Honestly. Rewrite this, please?
Avid Hetalia fan