| Reviews for It was Because of Lust |
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   blackitee chapter 5 . 12/4/2009 NO. NO, no no no. this is a sort of tragedy! |
| Mac chapter 5 . 11/21/2009 This is supposed to be complete? What kind of ending was that? It sucked balls. |
| Fate Harbor chapter 1 . 11/21/2009 I liked the story, but I'd like to offer some constructive criticism. You have a lot of run on sentences that tripped me up and plot developments seemed to materialize out of thin air. Like when Draco sees her in the library and just 'had to have her'. He's had this obsession for a while, so why now? What makes him lose control, what's going through his head? I hope that helps and you should definitely keep writing. You have a lot of great ideas! |
| dracomione12 chapter 5 . 11/20/2009 Haha. cute. :3 more please. :D |
| shadowontherun chapter 5 . 11/20/2009 love the story but was that the ending? so many questions...so little time. sequel! |
| voldyismyfather chapter 4 . 11/10/2009 lvoe itxx |
| Maloryx14archive chapter 4 . 11/9/2009 ace story, can't wait to see what happens next. |
| BeautifulPieces chapter 3 . 10/16/2009 I Wonder what Pansy is going to do update soon plz |
| BeautifulPieces chapter 2 . 10/6/2009 Great chapter I so can't wait for more! update soon plz |
| BeautifulPieces chapter 1 . 10/6/2009 I love this story already... It was Because of Lust I love the title |
| voldyismyfather chapter 1 . 9/21/2009 i love it x |
