Reviews for The Potters |
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platitudes chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 Wow, this is seriously a travesty. This story is so fucking close to being script-written, I'd feel more comfortable getting my eyes skewered out by a red-hot poker covered in irate centipedes. It is impossible to tell what the hell is going on, and the lack of any content (excepting dialogue.) isn't helping in the slightest bit. The grammar is nonexistent, and the actual story could have been executed in a better manner by a five-year old with down syndrome. Please think about redoing this shit, or getting off this site. 1/10. |
simona chapter 6 . 12/13/2009 i love it! fantastic keep writing love ya |
Maraduers mistress - Julia chapter 6 . 12/13/2009 Great story Sophia! Haha Draco will always be hotter than his son. Remember that. Keep up the great writing and make sure you update it more often! |
MagicWeMade chapter 5 . 9/30/2009 LOVED IT PHIA! WRITE MORE OR ILL DO SOMETHING, NOT SURE WHAT BUT I WILL |
Marauder's Mistress chapter 5 . 9/29/2009 Aw! That's so adorable. I could just picture talking about puberty with my brother. I'd rather die than do that! xD Keep up the good work Phia! xoxo |
marauders mistress chapter 4 . 9/27/2009 Hahaha, i love james. xD "You mean.. I wasn't born in the cabbage patch?" Where did that come from? |
MagicWeMade chapter 4 . 9/25/2009 lol ! loved it phia, cant wait for the next one |
trololololollolol chapter 4 . 9/25/2009 lol! so cute! keep writing |
Marauder's Mistress chapter 3 . 9/25/2009 Ahahaha Filch, the perve. xD Hahahaha. That reminds me in Tranformers when they asked their son if he was masturebating. We can call it Lily's happy time! xD. this is a total classic. MORE MORE MORE! |
Marauder's Mistress chapter 2 . 9/25/2009 I never pictured Ginny to call Harry babe. :S lmao. It's cute. Keep it up. I love ur story! 3 |
trololololollolol chapter 3 . 9/25/2009 amazing r u actually gonna show then giving her the talk that will be soo funny! |
MagicWeMade chapter 3 . 9/25/2009 lol, filth a pervert. lol lily masturbating lol. i cant wait for the next one phia please keep writing! |
trololololollolol chapter 2 . 9/24/2009 that was fantastic lily seems so cute! please keep writing |
MagicWeMade chapter 2 . 9/24/2009 omg, i thought i was reading a real harry potter book by J.K rolling it was awesome phia cant wait till the next one! |
MagicWeMade chapter 1 . 9/24/2009 luv u phia. u did an awesome job writing this!, its really good i cant wait for you to update the next chapter.! |