very beautifully done :D

wow is great one of the best one shot i've read really

Very well written and the ending made me laugh.

This story may, with a massive re-write, have been a decent pwp. There were so many grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors in this piece I am completely unable to give it a favourable review.

HAHA! So it was Hermione's fault that Draco shagged Harry senseless? I LUV YA MIONE!

i love it hope that it isnt just a one shot!

Not a bad effort. The story line shows potential.

I would say that you should look into a beta to clean up any gramatical and spelling errors as well as help the story flow better.

Good effort though! Keep writing!

*points and laughs*

I can't believe Hermione was the one who got them together! Tis funny. :DD

Yay uke Harry! xD

This is really good! I really liked it, but your sentences are a bit awkward. Try reading your sentences aloud to see if they make sense, or see if anyone will Beta your work. If you can't find anyone drop me a line, since I am a beta for this site.

I look forward to seeing more stories from you.