Reviews for Sunset
PumaGoddess chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
Great story idea, just small errors. Work on comma placement, and I doubt madara would say creep or freak out. I really liked your explanation for the massacre
Chibiabyss chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
please update soon
XxDreamfighter chapter 7 . 3/4/2013
Absolutely loved this story so far!, You kept the characters almost completely in character, it was great!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
and for further note.
Sakura just isn't fair! She got so close to Itachi & Madara
-Inner fan girl screams in protest;
i'm so jealous, even if Itachi was trying to kill her ;.;
SakuraHimeYoi chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
Love this story, its awesome:)
Just sad that you stoped updating:(
Scribomaniac chapter 7 . 4/30/2012
Will you be updated again?
Lorenzo X chapter 7 . 3/7/2012
Hey whyd you stop updating i like it may i adopt it?
Not important chapter 7 . 1/17/2011
Update please. This is such a great story totally original. I love! Update whenever you can nut please hury.
Chihori-chan chapter 7 . 12/19/2010
Great story! Totally love it. Update soon. )
Mariagoner chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Very interesting beginning, and I love your Sakura's spunk already. Can't wait to keep reading this!
Seshomaru'shootingstar chapter 6 . 11/26/2010
i like it a lot...but the team seeing sakura naked was WAY too aukward,,,i didnt read any furthher, bcause i luv saku-chan and y hurt her!
Happyfish chapter 7 . 11/24/2010
wow that was very hot! *blushes*
xXFallenxBeautyxX chapter 7 . 10/22/2010
Omg i knew Madara's hormones would kick in soon! Great chapter update soon :)
sakura-cherrytree chapter 7 . 9/20/2010
UPDATE! It's awesome!
KagomeAngel91 chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
Whoa hotness!
yuchi1994 chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
please update soon!1
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