Awesome

Ahhhhhhhh. It was really sweet...
good job~

This is a truly heartwarming story, thank you!

That was really cute, I liked the idea of Arthur knowing Merlin's secret, and your reasoning was good. Now I'll never be able to watch season 1 again without wondering. xD

So. Adorable. Lovely and well-written.

Lovely. I like how you took some of the well-known lines and twisted them around to have different or more meaning, like that magic is dangerous to the user too.

I liked that! An interesting take on how Arthur finds out. Thank you! A pleasure to read.

Oh, adorable! It showas the trust Arthur has in Merlin 3

Perfect!

I loved!

Ja ne. ;D

aw cutesy :D

Very cute story! It's always nice when Arthurs is understanding about magic. There were a few grammatical errors though. Like: "with a found smile" (instead of a fond smile), "shrinking his duty" (instead of shirking) and "able to trust him despite of the secrets" (when it would be either in spite of the secrets, or despite the secrets). Still, I enjoyed it a lot 8)

Interesting one-shot. :)

brilliant arthur must know he cant be that stupid

I loved your use of run-on sentences in this story to describe Merlin and Arthur. It works very well as a stream of conscious thought.

The only (minor) complaint I have is when Arthur dunks Merlin in the bathtub. The spelling in that section is terribly important to the story, seeing as it has action, and there are a couple of words (shows him underwater should be shoves, despite the violent trashing should be thrashing).

Hopefully this helps you out.

:D That was brilliant! The ending made me squee and I loved the idea of Arthur trying to protect Merlin from his own magic, that was so original. All together a very, very good story! *faves*