Route Taiga

Well, if you haven't made it clear that Medusa is the Best Girl in this story before, this chapter certainly wipes away any uncertainties!

God damn, Shirou is such a bottom bitch!

How the hell does Shirou think he can pursue his definition of justice when his situational awareness is a sack of shit?!

As amusing as it is to imagine the upcoming confrontation between Medusa and Alter!Arturia, the latter shouldn't defend Shirou, for it's about damn time someone stomped that disgusting beta male personality out of him. How the hell is he going to manage his collective/harem if he can't discipline their luscious bodies when needed?

Wuah, I love Shirou and Medusa's relationship so much! And the bits of Rin, Medusa, and Arturia all staking their claims on clueless Shirou are so very amusing, fufufu.

It's the battle of the onee-samas! Rin versus Luvia!

As well-written and entertaining this story is, Shirou's near complete lack of backbone and cluelessness when it comes to women got old after a couple of scenes. There is no why I can favourite a story when the protagonist remains a doormat throughout it.

I know it may be impossible, or damn near improbable, but I hope you'll still update this.

This story is very interesting and I really hope you will have more chapters in the future soon because this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man!

;)

Ok, I know this fic is old, but I still felt the need to review.

I love the story, but I have a serious problem with Rin here. What I like about Rin is her devotion to her sister even while abiding by her father's rules, but here she even places Saber above Sakura on her list of people she cares about, and that pissed me off. It's like she doesn't even care about Sakura at all here, or even thinks of her as a sister.

Apart from that though, I love everything about this fic. Especially Shirou's relationship with Rider. It's nice reading about the two of them like this.

If nothing else, I am convinced that this story is the reason half of my perception of Rider is that she is a total troll when she gets the chance to be. :D On the intricacies of the fic itself, I think the characterization is mostly spot on, except Sakura might be slightly exaggerated for comedic effect. You have great scenarios in all of your routes and I would love to see more of these one-shots or continuations(more butler!Shirou please)

Is there any chance you will continue writing these? It would be a shame to not see these either expanded or left at the four you have posted!
Rating:9/10!

oh that is just EVIL.

Im loveing this haha

umm... did you realize that your calling shirou sister?

several times you have had the girls calling shirou niichan, niichan is 'sister'

chan is female, san is male

well getting raped tends to make a man feel weird.

Very interesting the way you design this story

would like to see where it goes, are you planning on going through different routes when you hit the dead ends like you would in the game? or are you just planning on making it one timeline?

hope to see an update

very funny!

Whoa. That was cruel and unusual punishment. Kind of funny for the reader though. Interesting chapter.