Lovely, Gorgeous piece of fanfiction! Nobody's OOC, writing is great, two of my favourite platonic relationships in one fic, and portrayed greatly! Thanks so much!

Best ending!

Perfect! Absolutely perfect:D

XD Oh, my word! This was great! I loved the parental. . .ness there! It was so sweet, but not in a gross, slashy way! Great job! :D I think you pegged the characters perfectly! Roy, especially, was on target. I love how he didn't quite grasp why he was so protective of Ed!

This was sweet and believable!

Absolutely lovely story. I seems just like Roy to try and deny that Ed means so much to him. And Hughes was being typical Hughes; it seems he can't appear in any story without nagging Roy to get married. Thanks so much for writing.

Aww, sweet! Thanks for sharing this with us! I enjoyed reading your great story :D

very nice story! i really enjoyed it

Ha, cute :)

I liked how you wrote each character and how you wrote the relationships between them too. It's always nice to find a good fanfiction every once in a while, hehehe :D

Thanks for writing

Ha ha. This was pretty good. I liked the story and the concept, and characterization was decent. It was realistic the way Mustang and Hughes kind of talked to each other and didn't share everything with Al, and the nurse was a nice OC. I noticed some of your descriptions were a bit odd, though - you often used the noticeable words "bespectacled" and "obsidian," and it kept drawing attention away from the story itself. Perhaps you could use more variation. But I enjoyed it.

Great job! XD

lol, loved it.

This is excellent! Everyone is in character and Huges and Mustang's discussions are priceless! xD

Wonderful! I love parental Roy/Ed; it's just as exciting as anything. This was very well-written, and I enjoyed every bit of it :)

Hughes' last line was pretty funny XD

why should roy find a wife when he now has the full time job has a father of two you can't take one in without the other