Aww, 3 times the same chapter, and a dreadfully open ending... *puppy eyes* Go on? Please?

hey. sup. um... which book is Jander in? or did you make him up? i read the story a long time ago. now i forgot if he is an object of your imagination. email me with the answer! :)

-Randy

Now this is a goooood story! But it is begging for a sequal. I mean, you cant kill Jander! Not that I am against character death stories, but he has to wind up in Ravenloft and die there if you are following the official storyline. Or maybe this story is AU?

Yay! Well i'd say "Ahhh! how dare you kill Jander" and all that but sinse I already knew it would happen ;) i'll just say, Cool story now where is that Sequal! oh and just in case you didn't already notice I think you have to two extra chapters that don't belong, yup, bye now!

Okay, I'm too lazy to sign in. Kyle, I typed those chapters at 3:30 in the morning. Don't expect me to get the names right, I'll go back and change it to Eckerd later. And I think, yes, Garumn's Gorge is in Mithril Hall, but this is a different one. That name just sort of came to me when I was writing, and so I used it, and I wasn't sure where I had gotten it from, and so I used it, and I was pretty sure it was either from Drizzt of from LotR. Happy? I'll change that, too.

and for the third reveiw tonite, i really should make sure im done before submitting these things, isn't garumns gorge in mithril hall? itz where bruenor tied a barrel of oil to his back, set himself on fire and jumped on shimmergloom, sent them both crashing to the bottom of the gorge, was saved by drizzt's scimitar, escaped the hall, went to the harkle mansion, got catti-brie and rode a flaming flying chariot to go catch up with drizzt and wulfgar who were on the sea sprite with captian deudermont and went to rescue regis?

when jandar and pad'as are about to fight, she tell sarrasor to hold the baby, isn't he the bad guy?

not eckar simple decision

Very good story. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Let them kick the hunters' asses to Matztica and back. :)

Yay! More please! Ack running out of things to put in my reviews! Just put more! heh

still sooo cool! Keep it coming! More!

oh and by the way, elves don't dream or sleep, they enter the reverie, with the exception of Troy Denning's Galleron,(the dude who released the phareim on evereska and learned to use shadow magic)

YAY! You FINALLY continued! Thank you soooooo much! do it again do it again!

The story so far is great, *cough*cough* a little slow too update*cough*cough* jsut kidding, as for seeing the end before you read the book..WHY EVER WOULD YOU DO THAT! that takes the fun and the surprise out of it. normally when something happens it's "oh my god! i never thought that would happen, i'll have to keep reading". Whereas if you kno then ending it's just "oh...so thats how that happpens k gee i wished i hadn't read the ending"

keep writing, the story is excellent and so is the author good more!

You better write more! Cause if you don't i'll...i'll...ummmmmm...just write more! :)