Oh it was beautifuly sad... Thank you :)

Whoa. Wait. How did he die?

heart wrenching - def did not see that coming!

I now need to find a tissue to wipe my mascara away lol

Awe, Fuck, that was harsh... I'm still crying... sniff...

That was so heart wrenching beautiful...

Definitly on my fav list...

Take care

Brenda

Whoa, didn't see that coming. That hurt. Gut Punch. Glad I read it.

This was so beautiful and so sad

GAH, that was an awesomely horrible surprise, so very well done...I thought for sure they were at his wedding to Tanya or something! Bravo!

I loved the twist at the end, you really didn't see it coming and I was trying to figure out what was going on.

Wow, you know how to break a girl's heart, don't you? :( What a mindf*ck this was! While I would have liked to see a touch more detail about their lives, I understand that you were remaining purposely vague about the present so as not to spoil the secret. I admire the courage to not write a HEA, too! :)

As a judge, I really enjoyed this story!

Totally wasn't expecting that. Great job with the cliffie!

Thanks for entering!

OMG! FANTASTIC!I KNOW THAT THIS STORY IS COMPLETE BUT I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE IT...lol

love ya

Mira

Wow, totally not what I expected from your summary. I would mark this as a tragedy because it was just that sad. Thank you for sharing.

Made me cry. You just wrote about one of my greatest fears, losing my love. Ah shit, I can't even review without the water works starting again. Great story.

that...was...awesome!

WOW...that was absolutely amazing...my heart actually is aching right now.