What, you said that you would continue it?! I NEED MORE THIS IS SO GOOD PLEASE!

This was good so far! You really should update it!

Really like the story, especially the personalities you gave the characters.

Don't feel pressured about continuing it, it is a shame I don't get to read more of it, but I admit I have done the same thing myself.

I would like to give you an advice; make a draft of the whole story first, like a hasty scrtipt on what's going to happen and such, that way you can work on the story at your own pace without worrying about forgetting anything.

And something I try to do myself, not to post a story until it is completely finished, because just in case you lose interest in it and don't complete it.

It's been three years since this story was published and I'm starting to get the feeling that you're not going to continue this. I wouldn't blame you, but if you suddenly continue this that would make me happy.

I love this! 3

It is a nice story, but not finished. The relationship of 9 and 5 is going great but you stopped writing. I just hope you write more! Please write more.

From,
Jacil

REALLY? 8D YOU'RE GOING TO KEEP IT GOING? YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESY ES LXIJVNDFS;JVNDS; I CAN'T WAIT! 8D

ohmy lovin hotdogs please continue and update soon!
oh man that cliff hanger is killing me!
plesasasase!

oh lol ahahahhaha this story looks so interesting!
lol 5 no man not with your mouth ahahah XD

Heyyyyyy soooooo...are you gonna update anytime soon?
It's been three years since you've published this and I think
now is a time to get clock's a tickin'.So,JUST
START WRITING AGAIN!*hypervintales*I'm sorry,it's the
menses excellent really are good y'know.

ogfm if the twins dug up a playboy i would fukcing die it would actually kill me

omfg that sounds a lot dirtier than it actually is
5 pls

Awww ADORABLE! I know it's been a while since you updated, but still; CONTINUE!

I can't wait! I wonder how 9 will figure it out~ You know, ever since I watched 9 I knew this couple was made for me~! And you!

Gah... you left this alone! At that scene! You're a very mean author. Worse than me. It was getting so fluffy and cute. I want more, if you please.

I'll get friends to mob your review box if that'll make you update. I'm sure I know at LEAST seven other people who'd love this. So yeah, write more deary. It'd make me happy, lol.