This is actually very interesting. I'm sad it was discontinued.

Please continue this couple!

I really love your stories, by the way )

This is great! I enjoy reading it a lot. :D It's written very wonderfully, and I love the plot. I hope you post the next chapter soon! I love it. :)

Ah! I wait with baited breath for the next chapter! Sheesh, you have all my favourite pairings in here T.T give us mooooooore to read! It's cruel to end it like this haha.

Geeze I love your writing soooo much! I'm addicted haha.

Kitty

Awww poor Cloud! Looks like he got lost again! He must really feel bad about Zack to let it affect him. Hopefully Seph and Vincent don't kill him later! Riku didn't seem all that scared of him!

Great start! Can't wait for the update!:)

Wow. I meant to tell you this before but... The way you write can convert anyone to your pairings. Seriously. I'm not a big fan of some crack pairings, but when I read your fics I feel as if the couple involved could work out. It's strange.

This fic is a good case of your awesome stroy-telling skills.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!

Hoo boy! You always seem to make Cloud totally effed up in the head and I always seem to like it. Why is that?

I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Please continue!

interesting.. i can't wait to see what happens next!

lol, great story! if only everyone was lucky enough to be punished like leon, lol.

Hm...not sure how I feel about the Cloud/Riku BUT the Sephiroth/Leon and Reno/Sora I absolutely love!

Please continue this one!

Sounds really good. Can't wait to read more. -

Continue! Please continue! This story is awesome already! And I have a question. Is Riku a Light being in this one?

I love it! The whole Riku, son of Zack thing, and then Cloud's psychosis- is it a bad thing that I just adore your psychotic Cloud so much? I really, really, really hope to read more in the future!