Reviews for Control |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This feels like the beginning of a larger story that begs to be finished . I'm going to follow it in hopes that you do so |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sexy! Can I read some more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, that was...interesting...Nice. |
![]() ![]() Prissy uptight Hermione gets laid by Luna who seems to be "innocent" totally awesome. |
![]() ![]() Lol! Wow I seriously didn't know Luna had it in her! :) Fantastic. I'll read anything Luna/Herm you put up! If you got anything else lemme know :P eeeemail me! I'm working on some hermione/Bella slash myself.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :)(: Woo-hoo. Luna making Hermione lose control in a smutty fantastic way is wonderfully,sexy. :)(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow - This was amazing I was absolutely enthralled by this congrats :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. That was incredibly sexy. I love the idea of Hermione finally losing control, especially to a very cute Ravenclaw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...go luna! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great job. I felt it was a bit rushed, but for a simple smutty oneshot it was excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Would love to see more, especially with Luna taking even more control of Hermione, Hermione becoming submissive? Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please tell me that you are going to write what happens in the room of requirement at 8 pm on friday between hermione and luna |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay if you don't write another story to this awesome one i will sue you for... leaving an awesome story with a cliffhanger. i don't know if i can sue you for that but you better write another story! |