Reviews for Control |
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ScorpionChild91 chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 This feels like the beginning of a larger story that begs to be finished . I'm going to follow it in hopes that you do so |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 G |
wizards of gallifrey chapter 1 . 5/6/2017 Sexy! Can I read some more? |
Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/10/2015 Haha, that was...interesting...Nice. |
Ghost chapter 1 . 2/24/2015 Prissy uptight Hermione gets laid by Luna who seems to be "innocent" totally awesome. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013 Lol! Wow I seriously didn't know Luna had it in her! :) Fantastic. I'll read anything Luna/Herm you put up! If you got anything else lemme know :P eeeemail me! I'm working on some hermione/Bella slash myself.. |
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013 :)(: Woo-hoo. Luna making Hermione lose control in a smutty fantastic way is wonderfully,sexy. :)(: |
Deviouslytwisted chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 Wow - This was amazing I was absolutely enthralled by this congrats :D |
Smayz chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 Oh my god. That was incredibly sexy. I love the idea of Hermione finally losing control, especially to a very cute Ravenclaw. |
shadowontherun chapter 1 . 5/10/2010 wow...go luna! |
CityLites chapter 1 . 3/22/2010 LOVE this. |
Nongarak chapter 1 . 3/8/2010 Wow, great job. I felt it was a bit rushed, but for a simple smutty oneshot it was excellent. |
walters1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010 This is a great story! Would love to see more, especially with Luna taking even more control of Hermione, Hermione becoming submissive? Great job. |
The Codemeister chapter 1 . 11/6/2009 please tell me that you are going to write what happens in the room of requirement at 8 pm on friday between hermione and luna |
shut up and read or go away chapter 1 . 11/4/2009 okay if you don't write another story to this awesome one i will sue you for... leaving an awesome story with a cliffhanger. i don't know if i can sue you for that but you better write another story! |