Reviews for Control
ScorpionChild91 chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
This feels like the beginning of a larger story that begs to be finished . I'm going to follow it in hopes that you do so
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
G
wizards of gallifrey chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
Sexy! Can I read some more?
Darth Nightmaricus chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Haha, that was...interesting...Nice.
Ghost chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Prissy uptight Hermione gets laid by Luna who seems to be "innocent" totally awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Lol! Wow I seriously didn't know Luna had it in her! :) Fantastic. I'll read anything Luna/Herm you put up! If you got anything else lemme know :P eeeemail me! I'm working on some hermione/Bella slash myself..
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
:)(: Woo-hoo. Luna making Hermione lose control in a smutty fantastic way is wonderfully,sexy. :)(:
Deviouslytwisted chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Wow - This was amazing I was absolutely enthralled by this congrats :D
Smayz chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Oh my god. That was incredibly sexy. I love the idea of Hermione finally losing control, especially to a very cute Ravenclaw.
shadowontherun chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
wow...go luna!
CityLites chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
LOVE this.
Nongarak chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Wow, great job. I felt it was a bit rushed, but for a simple smutty oneshot it was excellent.
walters1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is a great story! Would love to see more, especially with Luna taking even more control of Hermione, Hermione becoming submissive?

Great job.
The Codemeister chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
please tell me that you are going to write what happens in the room of requirement at 8 pm on friday between hermione and luna
shut up and read or go away chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
okay if you don't write another story to this awesome one i will sue you for... leaving an awesome story with a cliffhanger. i don't know if i can sue you for that but you better write another story!
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