This story is so good, please keep on writing it.

I don't care if you haven't updated in years! Update anyway! XD

So Al's in London or Germany?

Is this set in Fullmetal Alchemist or Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood or the Manga?

its very nice. I think you should work on your descriptive writing a tad bit more though.

Nice story, I was really interested in how Naruto ended up paying a price for his own mistake and how instead of getting his brother back he gets Naruto instead. I think the white thing would do something like that, it's sadistic, taking the payment but not giving what the person asked for, sounds right along it's lines. Giving Naruto no memory, that was a nice touch, I can see how that would work. I really like your for though in not letting Naruto have any memory, not only does it make sense, it opens up plot avenues. Well I hope you keep writing and improving.

This is just a request to you, you don't have to do it but I really hope you do, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking the "Good Person Test." It's a test that shows whether you are a good person, and how that effects your future. It's easy to find just the second result on a Google search under "Good Person Test."

I wish you would have continued this, its a really good story. Oh well, I'm going to go check out your profile! :D

Black Rose

I beg of you to please update this! I really want to see how this story will go and also Rose is one of my favorite characters in the Fullmetal episodes.

It's a shame on what had happen to her people and what had happen to her mostly T_T (RAGE!)

Okay i love this story its amasing update soon. :)

any reason why you haven't updated this is good

are you going too finsh this?

Why have not continued this story? this great!

im likeing your work please update

i love this please update soon!

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